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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Connecticut

I graduated from Bryant University with a Bachelors degree in Communications and Marketing. I am seeking an investment opportunity in the New York City restaurant industry. My goal is to own and operate my own restaurant, but for now, I'd like to enter the space as an individual investor. I will be living in Brooklyn, NY, but am open to other areas in the city. I look forward to connecting.

$100,000 to $150,000

United States > Texas

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$150,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Georgia

looking for real deals that make sense for me and my investors. deals that can make money on great returns.

$1,000,000 to $8,000,000,000

United States > Pennsylvania

I have never invested this way and am thinking about investing at this time. I am the executive Director of a non-profit organization.

$7,500,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Georgia

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$500,000 to $160,000,000

Venezuela > Caracas

45 Years Old, Married, Living in Venezuela, travelling frequently to the US, Miami and New York City. Entrepreneur since 14 years old. In the food industry for the las 20 years (Both Fast and Slow Food). At the present, owner of the most important take out restaurant of Caracas. Some experience in both Real State and Financial. Will be involved as a Silent Investor or Partner. Individual Investor.

$1,000 to $250,000

United States > New York

I'm a 53 year old retired software company director with a BS in Electrical Engineering. I currently own a small software company and I'm looking to be a hands-on investor in other startups both tech and non-tech.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > Nevada

Our firm was originally incorporated in 1996 as an economic development and information technology consulting firm. The Company has since been re-invented recently incorporated on August 30, 2013. The goal of The Company is to guide small and mid-sized business owners to the next levels of their firm's growth and development. The primary tools for this development are capital funding for real estate and business resources like salaries, inventory and equipment and also, management consulting on how to efficiently control resources and revenue.

$250,000 to $10,000,000