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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

Australia > bonogin

I am a CEO of an investment company looking for excellent companies.

$1,000,000 to $200,000,000

United States > New York

I am an individual investor looking for opportunities especially in Emerging Markets but am also keenly looking at new products/services for the developed markets. I have a background in corporate finance and strategy.

$1 to $50,000

United States > Maryland

I am a consultant for Private and Hedge Funds investors who mostly invest in debt financing, however they sometime depends on the deal they will do equity participation.

$10,000,000 to $500,000,000

United States > California

Young investor with excess income. Looking to invest in interesting products/services. Military and civilian background.

$1 to $100,000

United States > Florida

A financial advisory firm that provides companies with time sensitive financing needs access to senior debt, mezzanine and private equity capital for the purposes of refinancing, acquisition, restructuring and growth initiatives. Our experience spans a broad range of industries including energy, financial services, media/broadcasting, real estate, healthcare, telecom manufacturing, distribution and emerging technology to name a few. With access to over $5 billion of capital through our financing resources, Prestige has the ability to help clients quickly structure meaningful equity, senior debt and mezzanine capital. We will also make direct investment from time to time.

$2,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Pennsylvania

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$100,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Texas

Private Investor Source has over 340 Private Investors in our group, we Introduce Entrepreneurs & Business Owners to Investors. We also have access to Commercial Lenders as well as 100 Million Programs.

$150,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New Jersey

I want to retire soon from my sales job.I am by myself with kids.Have my masters degree in psychology. I have in the past and in some cases still am investing in purchasing and renting out properties. In the past with a company dealing with tax lien. I have also invested in import and export with a partner at fixed interest rate.

$25,000 to $45,000