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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I am a individual investor. I live with my wife and my daughter in the New York city area. I am willing to invest in concept ideas and want to involve hands-on or in the advisory board. Thanks and looking forward to working with you.

$1,000 to $5,000

United States > New York

I am a married man that works in a family business owned by my wife's side of the family. My growth here is limited and I am looking to invest in something that may be a good opportunity for me to make additional money or possible even become a partner in.

$0 to $200,000

United States > Texas

I am a Real Estate investor I have invested in Residential and commercial projects and I am looking for other projects at the moment to invest in

$100,000 to $200,000

United States > Virginia

I am 51 years, married and live Aldie, VA I am a Lead Information Security office at Navy Federal Credit Union I am currently the Commercial Director of Blues-Solar UK I have an MSc degree in Finance and Information Systems. I have invested $100000 in Blues -Solar Ltd over the last 4 years.

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I am a doctor and became a self made millionaire at age 33, through building a successful multidisciplinary Corporation of healthcare professionals in The upstate new york region. I am now 39 years old and happily married. since I was very young I had an opportunity to work in my family business since I was about 10 years of age and I got to know what real hard work was and what it took to be successful in life. I would like to share some of that knowledge with other people and help them as well as help myself in the process. I have helped health care professionals as well as a few entrepreneurs start and expand their businesses. I'm an individual investor but also have connections with other colleagues that are also accredited investors. I'm not just someone with monetary resources. I myself above all things, am an entrepreneur and a visionary and proud to be so. I hope to .be involved with other people that share some the same characteristics

$5,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Illinois

Executive and private investor.

$100,000 to $200,000

United States > Texas

I really don't want to share anything specific on this site at this time. We have an extra $100,000 per month to look at for possible investment

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I am a working professional who has been in operational management and consulting for large corporations for over 15 years. I have enjoyed training & developing and have had much success driving sales for my employer. I also have over five years of experience in the bar industry aiding in management and specializing in promotion work.

$5,000 to $30,000