New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Nevada

Looking for a business that I can be integrally involved in yet allow me not to have to micromanage. I am looking for a nice return on my capital and am looking to expand whatever I do internationally. I travel alot and I am only interested in working with individuals who have a Business plan in place. (Fail to plan, plan to fail philosophy here). I have Business experience in High net worth individuals, Entertainment, Real Estate and the stock market. I have also owned a Car dealership and managed portfolios and models. Please contact me with serious inquiries, be very realistic and if you haven't seen the show "SHARK TANK" Hulu it and watch the first 3 episodes so you can understand how I look at VC and Angel Networking investment philosophy. Thank you, Greg

$20,000 to $200,000

United States > Georgia

Commercial Consultant for the past 4 years. Banking for the past nine years. Currently working with commercial financing organization.

$2,500,000 to $50,000,000

United States > New York

MBA - Finance Undergrad - MIS & Strategic Management Wharton educated Tech & Finance background, entrepreneurial spirit, analytical, and strategic thinker. Require hands-on involvement in potential investment.

$0 to $500,000

United States > New York

extensive experience in corporate finance (accounting, controlling, audit)

$0 to $50,000

United States > New York

Based in Manhattan, New York City, with 25 years’ experience in business and real estate finance, I am a direct investor and I have syndication/participation relationships with banks, pension funds, insurance companies, REITS, hedge funds and private equity firms. Term loan minimums: $4,000,000; Revolving credit facility minimums: $2,000,000. For: Real Estate Owners/Investors/Developers; Manufacturers; Distributors; Wholesalers; Construction Builders & GC Firms; Travel, Leisure & Hospitality Companies; Importers/Exporters (domiciled in North America); Service Industry Firms. I do not charge up-front/application fees for JV/ equity investment opportunities. Some fees necessary,disclosed up front, as work is done if credit facillities are requested/required. Thank you. MC

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > California

Young investor with excess income. Looking to invest in interesting products/services. Military and civilian background.

$1 to $100,000

United States > Washington

Yocam Holdings LLC is a privately held for-profit investment firm with headquarters in Bellevue, WA. Founded in September 2006 by five members of the Yocam family, the firm's partnership manages a diverse set of investments within the company's portfolio while actively pursuing various venture capital opportunities. The firm's investment portfolio consists of multiple components across multiple asset classes such as investments in emerging technology, pharmacogenomics, real estate, and entertainment.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I am a V.P. with a Wall Street Investment Group; that have partnerships with Private Equity Investors, Hedge Funds, Hard Money Investors, Joint Venture Capital Firms, etc... that funds deals based on the project. Interest only payments made annually, not monthly. Balloon payment due at the end of the term of the loan. Funding available as an Equity Partner also available. Loan amounts that are funded are anywhere from $500K to 100 Million+. Please submit your projects that are in need of funding and the deal will get submitted directly to the funding source. We work with Brokers and Principals all around the World. Thank you and we hope to work with you on your next deal.........

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000