New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New Jersey

I am a successful corporate executive with skills in a variety of areas, looking to invest in a few side projects.

$10,000 to $300,000

United States > California

Self admitted investor, currently working in entertainment and transportation start-up but am open to other industries

$1 to $25,000

United States > Washington

Providing Joint Venture Funding for qualified projects. Min. funding amount $5,000,000 to $500,000,000 Larger funding amounts possible upon review. No DEBT SERVICE Many years working in the commercial & investment banking industry. Private Investment Group.

$5,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

I have invested in public and private companies in several industries. I have real estate holdings as well and have started my own businesses in the past. I work as an advisor and angel capital provider to early stage businesses.

$25,000 to $1,000,000

United Arab Emirates > Dubai

We are an early, intermediate and later stage investor interested in significant equity participation. We invest in privately held companies that are looking for: - Expansion capital for emerging growth companies, - Mezzanine financing, - Strategic mergers and acquisitions, - Special situation funding. Our team consists of active entrepreneurs and professionals with financial, management and technical expertise. They have over 70 years of combined real world experiences in actively starting, building, managing and supporting companies. Management team members have been involved in a variety of businesses in diverse areas such as management, accounting, investments, insurance, sales & marketing, strategic development, corporate consultancy, training & development. We are a Group Investor.

$500,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

I am a self starter. Taking risks is a big part of my life. Calculated risks are acceptable at times,and I like the tried and True. Leadership is a big role because I usually like to be in charge and usually get people to go along when I initiate something.I also like to have a plan before I start anything.

$10,000 to $25,000

United States > New York

A Successful Entrepreneur seeking to diversify and expand my Investment. Am a graduate of Harvard Business School and also holds a Doctorate degree in Psychology.

$25,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New York

I've owned my own self-funded businesses since 1995. I understand the entrepreneur mentality and drive, and I'm interested in finding some great entrepreneurs to work with and fund, to help them grow... and to earn a solid return on my investments.

$1,000 to $250,000