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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New Jersey

I'm a 42 year old male with three children. Worked for Morgan Stanley & Lehman Brothers for 15 years managing all aspects of operations. Marketing & sales is my background. I'm looking for a partner I can invest in gaining equity in an existing business. I would like to dig in to all areas of operations and staffing. Policies / procedures etc... I can turn things around very quickly!

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > Virginia

Currently have a 401k and money market accounts., some short end stocks, mutual funds and bonds

$0 to $5,000,000

United States > Texas

I have been in the investment and Banking arena for more than 9 years. I am REALTOR doing business in ALL 50 States. I am looking for investors for both residential and commercial properties. I am willing to work with anyone that is equally ready for a purchase.

$100,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

Professional institutional equity investor with expertise in various company and industry analysis

$1 to $200,000

United States > Texas

I am willing to be an angel investor! I enjoy making new contacts and being apart of succeful projects. I have the capital to invest, if the venture appears to be lucrative and love being apart of exciting turn arounds! I am always looking to help new business get off the ground, and turn a profit in the process!

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

Stephen is an investment professional and corporate turnaround specialist. He is a Director at an investment firm with holdings both domestically and internationally in real estate, transportation, energy, and luxury services. Additionally, he is an adjunct lecturer at the City University of New York. Previously, he lead the Emerging Markets Investment Banking team at Oppenheimer of North America, where the firm advised on $6 billion in aggregate transactions. In particular, he worked closely with Foreign Direct Investments to accelerate economic growth in the Central Europe, MENA, and Asia regions. Prior to Oppenheimer, Stephen was a Vice President at J.P. Morgan and before that, he was a Vice President at Bear Stearns. Stephen was educated at the NYU School of International Business & Finance and the NYU Schack Institute of Real Estate. He holds a Bachelor of Science from Brown University.

$1 to $20,000,000

United States > North Carolina

I’m an independent investor. I like to see business flourish and yield returns. I know funds are very rare these days and due to the present economic situation of the world now, it requires few people privileged to have the funds required to make successful business and ventures. This project will require me to come down to you to finalize. I am well pleased to have met someone like you and hopefully we will have a long lasting business relationship with you .I can tell you that I’m quite fortunate to have inherited some fortune spread across some financial institutions across the US and Offshore. I had always thought of establishing a successful businesses and ventures but due to my disability, I thought of an idea of making entrepreneurs and business owners achieve their goal and become successful. Being part of their success would have made up for my inability to completely create a business system for myself.

$50,000,000 to $90,000,000

United States > Pennsylvania

I am a founding partner of a Socially Responsible Venture Fund based in Lancaster, PA. The objective of the Fund is to invest in exciting, early- stage (NOT Start-ups), high growth humanitarian, sustainable, environmental or socially responsible businesses with a focus on those that are primed for rapid expansion if they had the funding. The purpose of the Fund is to earn superior financial returns for our investors by capitalizing on leveraged private equity investing in rapid- growth companies and then managing the process to take those companies public either by a ‘reverse-merger’ on the U.S. stock market, a listing on the London Stock Exchange or other method so that our investment is liquid.

$100,000 to $1,000,000