New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

My background is in the broadcasting and marketing business. I'm looking for investment opportunities that provide cash flow or viable start-up ventures.

$1,000,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Georgia

I have been a serial entrepreneur for nearly 30 years. Keen understanding of what it takes to start and nurture a business. I am looking to become involved in businesses that make sense for me.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I have seven years of investment experience across a variety of securities, from secured debt to equity, in both public and private companies. I hope to work with early stage companies seeking to disrupt a legacy industry. I am willing to engage in different levels of involvement throughout the process depending on need.

$0 to $50,000

United States > Illinois

I exclusively seek different companies to inject capital into to help fund. I am part of a institutional investment group/accredited investors that actively seeks projects to inject capital into for an equity portion of their company. The range is from $500k to $5M+ There is no particular industry that is favored when it comes to funding. The investment group have no geography limits,as the group recently opened offices in Sweden even though they are located in the United States.

$500,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Georgia

I'm a private investor

$2,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

I am a small business owner who has two LLCs that do fairly well, I am looking for the opportunity to help excited young businesses grow.

$100 to $200,000

United States > New York

To Whom It May Concern: I worked for international media companies for 24 years - had positions as Chairman, President, COO and EVP. Started a few companies in between. At this stage of my life I want to put my experience and capital to good use. I am interested in investing as well as active participation in businesses. Having 'skin in the game' makes a lot of sense. I am affiliated with a group of experienced angel investors and turnaround specialists in Chicago. We have a team of people who can assist with various challenges.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > Illinois

We invest in "have to have" ideas. Cutting-edge ideas with high quality management teams are what attracts us most.

$50,000 to $5,000,000