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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Colorado

As chairman of the Transwestern Financial Group of companies, historical involvment has been in representing borrowers, lenders and investors in varous consulting capacities regarding project structure and financing, sale/acquisition and intermediary negotiation. For past 3 - 5 years, activities have been primarily as an individual investor-lender and manager for a private family-owned investment trust and as financial advisor to selected projects and clients. Present services consist of acting as a financial advisor to a select range of clients including direct investment, financial structuring, financing and intermediary negotiation.

$100,000 to $25,000,000

United States > New York

Limited investment history, work as an actuary in a fortune 500. Private investor.

$10,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

I am a doctor and became a self made millionaire at age 33, through building a successful multidisciplinary Corporation of healthcare professionals in The upstate new york region. I am now 39 years old and happily married. since I was very young I had an opportunity to work in my family business since I was about 10 years of age and I got to know what real hard work was and what it took to be successful in life. I would like to share some of that knowledge with other people and help them as well as help myself in the process. I have helped health care professionals as well as a few entrepreneurs start and expand their businesses. I'm an individual investor but also have connections with other colleagues that are also accredited investors. I'm not just someone with monetary resources. I myself above all things, am an entrepreneur and a visionary and proud to be so. I hope to .be involved with other people that share some the same characteristics

$5,000 to $2,000,000

United States > New Jersey

Problem solver, out of the box thinker, enjoy crafting elegant solutions to tough problems, strategic planning, negotiating deals. Deep experience in technology and finance, Dual degrees in Economics and Computer Science from Wharton School, University of Pennsylvania (Management & Technology Program). Investing individually and representing family interests. Looking for advisory and hands-on opportunities.

$300,000 to $4,000,000

United States > New York

I am an individual investor from Long Island with a Masters Degree in Engineering and more than 30 years of international experience of working in three continents.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > Florida

We are a very successful direct response TV and multichannel marketing company seeking unique consumer products to market.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United Arab Emirates > Dubai

We are an early, intermediate and later stage investor interested in significant equity participation. We invest in privately held companies that are looking for: - Expansion capital for emerging growth companies, - Mezzanine financing, - Strategic mergers and acquisitions, - Special situation funding. Our team consists of active entrepreneurs and professionals with financial, management and technical expertise. They have over 70 years of combined real world experiences in actively starting, building, managing and supporting companies. Management team members have been involved in a variety of businesses in diverse areas such as management, accounting, investments, insurance, sales & marketing, strategic development, corporate consultancy, training & development. We are a Group Investor.

$500,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Florida

Our investment are primarily in commercial real estate, our background is 20 yrs in real estate investments, I am a private investor.

$25,000 to $500,000