New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

30 Years in the jewelry manufacturing business. We have financed various projects throughout the years ranging from real estate to precious metals and mining. Current investments include gold refineries, real estate throughout the world, and commodities.

$0 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

My name is Mozz. I'm a 34 year old guy from Bensonhurst, Brooklyn. I went to school for theater. I've been in sales since I was 17; Phones, Mortgages, Digital Marketing, Advertising, etc. I helped start the leading online news website for the wholesale intimates business. I was also a partner in running an apparel trade show in NYC. I can sell, present, schmooze, entertain, and open people up. I am an excellent judge of character. I listen very well. My days as an actor have taught me to take criticism exceptionally well. I'm a natural leader, and a natural mediator. I'm seeking an opportunity to work with people who think like me, on something I can believe in. I have the time and resources to devote to a great idea.

$1,000 to $75,000

Turkey > New York

i am 40 years old. i'm individual investor.i live in Turkey. i would like to invest in NYC any interesting project. i have a small company. i have some investments in turkey at various areas. so that will be first time out of my country. i have been in nyc few times. my experience usually wholesale products from east west such as china,india,indonesia.i can be silent investor give to money. or i can attend according to project with some products. sorry my english not enough:) but i have a lawyer in nyc. so he is following my business process.

$10,000 to $50,000

United States > Florida

A financial advisory firm that provides companies with time sensitive financing needs access to senior debt, mezzanine and private equity capital for the purposes of refinancing, acquisition, restructuring and growth initiatives. Our experience spans a broad range of industries including energy, financial services, media/broadcasting, real estate, healthcare, telecom manufacturing, distribution and emerging technology to name a few. With access to over $5 billion of capital through our financing resources, Prestige has the ability to help clients quickly structure meaningful equity, senior debt and mezzanine capital. We will also make direct investment from time to time.

$2,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > New York

I represent a group of individual and corporate investors, looking to maximize their return on real estate-related projects, nationwide. I have been in this business for 18 years, the last 8 owning my own firm. I will provide you with a quick and honest answer.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Florida

20 plus yrs Construction Management Property Development. Group of private investors.

$1,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New Jersey

Interested in Investing in business, startups, existing businesses in New York

$10,000 to $500,000

Israel > New York

I'm a CPA in my education with vast knowledge in finance. At the present I'm doing Cash Advance, hard money, with background in the RE fix & flip as well as RE development funding. During the years 2016-2019 I did food import. I'd be happy to hear about rock solid investment with good people that I can engage with as a hands-on partner and develop their business. Best regards, Eran

$1 to $200,000