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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Virginia

I am an Attorney at Law for the Caribbean who recently immigrated to the USA. I am also a Real Estate Investor .

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

Skilled professional with 20 years business experience.

$0 to $150,000

Canada > Langley

We invest in commercial (warehouse, office, retail) income producing properties only. We are an investment group that looks for a purchase price of no less than 1M and no maximum. Extensive experience in the industry.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Colorado

I invest personally in some ventures and I may refer (at no cost o the entrepreneur) them to company in California with greater resources. My background is in accounting (so your projections should demonstrate your solid understanding of the economics of your business and how it will succeed), the financial industry (banking and mortgage) and consulting. I have started a company from the ground up (been through the PPM process a few times) and been a part of a team that has grown a company rapidly and sustained that growth over years. I've been on both sides of mergers and acquisitions. I've experienced what it takes to succeed and managed through some difficult situations. I'm looking for companies with a strong core team, proven track record or can provide proof of concept (orders, contracts, LOI's, prototypes, etc) and have a innovative product/solution/approach that has tremendous upside potential. You need to be beyond the "idea" stage.

$500,000 to $5,000,000

United States > New York

Looking to make investment with reasonably active involvement in the management of the company - with exists in 2-5 years. Debt or Equity financing options exist. I have and am starting to invest in few different technology business with varying degrees of management involvement. Have started, built and successfuly sold technology and services business as well as heading and growing large global technology services and product development organizations for multi-national company. Have executed several acquisitions and managed mergers of organizations and companies. Am a private investor in the process of establishing a small group which will provide us more capital and deeper management talent.

$25,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

Active investor in early stage companies with defensible positions and proven management. Prefer Technology (including e-commerce), Bio-tech and Real Estate (including Hotel). $250K to $5M

$25,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

We are an investor group seeking to invest in innovative ideas, transactions and business opportunities. We have a preference for opportunities that are transformative within their competitive space, and significant growth potential. We have substantial experience investing in and managing real estate, chemical, internet and financial services businesses.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Florida

I as many individuals who have dreams and ideas of a better life for oneself and family, but like many “it is all depended on money” for the first steps of the dream to come true. I was blessed in making my dreams come true. So, as I was helped so I would like to help. The objective is to help others and at the same time make money for all who are in the process. MM

$25,000 to $500,000