New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I am an investor into a few industry sectors, primarily real estate and small Business investments. I don't want to put too much money in as anangel investor. But am willing to give someone a chance who doesn't need a lot of money to start and go from there.

$5,000 to $10,000

United States > New York

I am looking for other business opportunities to invest in. I am an entrepreneur who started and sold two different sales and marketing companies and currently is the CEO of a non profit and athletic organization. I am young and driven and know I can help in various different ways.

$1,000 to $30,000

United States > New York

Senior private investor that has experience across all industries but significant recent experience in technology, consumer and business services. Experience at board, operations and expanding network and opportunities given personal and professional network.

$25,000 to $500,000

United States > Connecticut

President of a national real estate acquisitions and financing firm specializing in residential and commercial real estate. Our business model allows us to effortlessly find properties for clients looking to acquire properties 70% loan to value or below. If the numbers make sense for a deal I can do it. So I am highly familiar with the investment process.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

I represent a large group of investors that sell properties 17-60 cents on the dollar. I have 18+ years in investing.

$1 to $10,000,000

United Arab Emirates > Dubai

We are an early, intermediate and later stage investor interested in significant equity participation. We invest in privately held companies that are looking for: - Expansion capital for emerging growth companies, - Mezzanine financing, - Strategic mergers and acquisitions, - Special situation funding. Our team consists of active entrepreneurs and professionals with financial, management and technical expertise. They have over 70 years of combined real world experiences in actively starting, building, managing and supporting companies. Management team members have been involved in a variety of businesses in diverse areas such as management, accounting, investments, insurance, sales & marketing, strategic development, corporate consultancy, training & development. We are a Group Investor.

$500,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Arizona

I am a young entrepreneur looking for potential start ups to invest in that I feel will have a good return. I have started multiple business and am always looking for the next best idea. I have experience with internet start ups marketing the real estate and college market.

$500 to $50,000

United States > Texas

Self made businessman. Allot of experience in real estate and online businesses. From California and living in Texas currently .Currently working on a renewable energy project that is showing allot of potential.

$25,000 to $200,000