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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Built a family business to scale and ultimately sold said business. Numerous seed capital experiences. Owner operator perspective. Ability to assist with financial modeling. Extensive business knowledge. Vast personal network.

$25,000 to $250,000

United States > New York

I am highly interested in investing. I currently invest in the stock market .i am looking to deepen my understanding about investment in general and definitely generate some profits.

$50,000 to $200,000

United States > North Carolina

Invested in several small start-up small to mid size firms. They have ranged from gym openings to technology based firms.. Background: Network engineer by trade, ventured out and started a investment firm primarily targeted to small-mid size companies. I am a Private Investor as well as a Managing partner in a investment firm.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > Missouri

Accounting, financial and real estate background

$25,000 to $1,250,000

United States > New York

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$2,000,000 to $900,000,000

Belgium > Heverlee

Business mostly in real estate in Belgium, Europe. I am US citizen by birth, 54 years old and ready to Invest in my country of birth. I would like to be involved in the business I will invest.

$100,000 to $300,000

United States > Georgia

have been in Real Estate for the last 15 years

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Connecticut

I am a life long entrepreneur with a dedication to helping business. I have owned two other operations, the second of which grossed 8 million dollars a year. I have a seasoned approach to business and along with my contacts seek to enhance operations as well. I/we have funding for business that have capital themselves to add to their ventures. My professional background includes marketing, retail, real estate and new media and as well i have some background in hospitality, publishing, and sales. I am associated with a group of investors , however the funding is non contingent on 100% agreement for any project/

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000