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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Connecticut

Invested in numerous projects, some acquired by my company, We do Joint Ventures, syndicate angel funding and work with funding sources. I invest with group or alone. We work mostly with ideas that have over $1 Billion potential. The rest we send to our upcoming site for funding.

$5,000 to $250,000

United States > New York

With access to dozens of lenders, investors and programs, AMBS has the ability to provide funds for just about any business. Though we do work in the investor space we prefer traditional loans/financing.

$20,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New York

Background in hotels, restaurants, real estate ownership, management and development. Seeking viable operating businesses with existing or strong potential for positive cash flow to achieve strong returns via cash flow as opposed to appreciation. Have capital to invest in smaller sized deals ($1m to $5m) and good network for investments in excess of $5m.

$0 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

Private investor

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I am an entrepreneur form Eastern Europe looking to expand my business in US, at this point in NY or NJ

$200,000 to $300,000

United States > New York

40yrs old, married individual investor. Started and currently own 3 companies. Started first company in 2001 (still own and operate). Have consulted other start ups and struggling businesses which have become profitable. College educated. Multiple contacts in the WNY area. Prefer to be a hands on/advisory type of investor.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Texas

Real estate investor specializing in student housing and college towns. Maintain real estate license in state of TX Private investor with current portfolio of approx 200 units. Specialize in Austin and College Station, TX markets Excellent track record and many industry connections.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > New Jersey

Our investment model is for acquisition and development only and not a vehicle for the funding of fully developed properties. It is required that the borrower is the titled owner of the property or has control of the property by purchase contract and that all entitlements have been acquired and development can be commenced at opening of the loan. That is, all engineering plans, construction drawings, permits and approvals and budgets are completed, therefore the project is "Shovel Ready". The guidelines are as follows: Term: 60 months. Rate : 8.25% (subject to underwriting and market). Minimum Loan Amount: $150,000,000. LTC: 100% Recourse: Non-Recourse to Principals after construction phase. Disbursements: Loan disbursed to escrow account in equal disbursements over the first 12, 24 or 36 months of the loan. Gross Profit Margin: 30% or better after debt, and average annual return greater than 15% is required.

$150,000,000 to $500,000,000