New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Florida

15 Years in Banking 10 Years in Corporate finance CFO of 18 small companies Looking for investments for a group of wealthy individuals that made their fortunes in Retail (Direct Response), low income housing, collection agencies, restaurants.

$20,000 to $200,000

United States > Florida

I have been investing in real estate for appox 10 years. If the project makes sense and if the project is legal count us in.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > California

I'm a loan officer for a mortgage Company. I have 5 years in the business now over the years i have built many relationship with many r.e.o. sales representatives from different banks. i have access to r.e.o. bulk inventory single family residence,and commercial state and nationwide we have new commercial inventory that just came out on the market we have hospitals and banks for sale and if you like since we are a direct mortgage bank and we can help you do your loans for the properties and if you want to sell them we have real estate agents that will find the buyers for your properties these option is only for California if you buy outside of California then we can just do the loans for you and if you are interested

$0 to $0

United States > New York

Angel investor with a professional banking background

$1 to $20,000

United States > Pennsylvania

Business owner for 25 years, have experience in payroll, marketing, accounting, Business relations.

$25,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Georgia

Earned an MBA from the Kellogg School of Management at Northwestern University and a BA in Economics and American Studies at the University of Richmond in Virginia. brings over 10 years of experience in healthcare operations and private equity investing. Our background includes oversight of Strategic Planning, Corporate Development and Sales & Marketing as the company grew. Our principal investment experience includes more than 50 completed transactions representing over $1.3 billion of equity capital.

$10,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

Have done over 15 Angel investments. I manage a fund for startup investing in the Hudson Valley.

$25,000 to $150,000

United States > New York

Entrepreneurial spirit, adventure, performance driven management, success and profit are important to me. I have started a consultancy (public and non profit management) in 2000, invested with success in an IT consultancy start up (helped as advisor) and made both enterprises profitable. I was appointed in a top position in government and had to stop my involvement in private companies. I have started a company in New York in January 2012 to start a consultancy and to invest in and help with start ups. Especially start ups in consultancy and IT/Apps have my interest. I am sure I can contribute to success, especially for younger less experienced entrepreneurs.

$10,000 to $50,000