New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New Jersey

I am young, enthusiastic individual investor in the North Jersey/NYC area. I graduated from business school in 2010 and I am currently working as a corporate restructuring consultant for a mid size firm in NYC which specializes in providing advisory services to distressed companies, lender groups/committees, etc., inside and outside of bankruptcy across various industries (majority of my experience is in real estate). I have technical financial skill set in financial modeling, valuation (DCF), accounting and auditing. I have passed the CPA (Certified Public Accountant) and CIRA (Certified Insolvency and Restructuring Advisor) exams and I am awaiting certain education/professional requirements to be certified. I have no entrepreneurial investment experience but I am trying to change that as I learn quickly and could add-value to any team. I would plan on being hands off/silent with a small advisory role and on any technical financial/accounting issues I could help with.

$0 to $25,000

United States > Maryland

I am an experienced entrepreneur, investor and consultant with a great sense of what works for products, pricing, markets and customers. I have an equal level of interest in services businesses as I do in new product offerings.

$1,000 to $250,000

United States > New York

I am looking for other business opportunities to invest in. I am an entrepreneur who started and sold two different sales and marketing companies and currently is the CEO of a non profit and athletic organization. I am young and driven and know I can help in various different ways.

$1,000 to $30,000

United States > New York

5 yrs angel investing 5 years banking

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

I represent an trust that has been in business going on 50 years. They are highly interested in all types of energy projects. Also construction, real estate, hotels, casinos and resorts MUST HAVE SOME EQUITY IN PROJECT PRESENTING. Will consider equity position and exit strategy. Have other relationships with other private sources which will entertain JV opportunities also Commercial Hard Money Minimum $10 Mil and Up ?????

$25,000,000 to $950,000,000

United States > Illinois

Private investor with interest in Mexican businesses.

$0 to $5,000

United States > New York

mostly small investments in sports teams and race horses.

$1,000 to $40,000

United States > South Carolina

I am a professional working in the medical field looking to invest as a silent partner. I am willing to invest a start up fee for a business with good growth potential. I am seeking only a return of my investment plus a small return.

$5,000 to $20,000