New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

Spain > Malaga

I have been investing in FEC's and retail outlets in Europe and the middle east for about 5 years. My background is in Real Estate. I represent a group of private investors and we are particularly interested in Theme park and Leisure developments

$100,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > New York

I am an individual investor from Long Island with a Masters Degree in Engineering and more than 30 years of international experience of working in three continents.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > New York

I represent a large group of investors that sell properties 17-60 cents on the dollar. I have 18+ years in investing.

$1 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

I am a Private Investor who looks for projects that offer Durable Competitive Advantage and that I can offer not only my financial assistance but yet my edcuation and experiences in business development. I am a former Fire Protection Specialist from the Department of Homeland Security. My ability to invest comes from consistant profitable returns on family investments leaving me the ability to invest in others and new businesses. I have a Bacholers of Science Degree in Safety and Environmental Engineering.

$10,000,000 to $45,000,000

United States > New York

- 36 year-old single woman with Asian background who has lived in 3 continents over the last 15 years (Asia, Australasia, Americas) - Corporate Executive in a large American Multinational Company with more than 60B annual revenue - Masters degree in commerce & BA in Economics - Invest in real estate and stocks currently - 10 years experience working, living and investing in China - Silent investor with advisory and hands-on optional if I can offer value - Individual investor

$50,000 to $150,000

United States > New York

Looking to invest in a nice business and make money

$500 to $30,000

United States > Michigan

Our firm has successfull invested in small to medium cap manufacturing firms since 1982 and an International Trading Company for 15 years. We now operate two Private Equity Funds with $500 AUM. We also have a new Fund with US OPIC backing supporting investment in Sub- Sahara Africa and are interested in products or services applicable to that region that is economically sustanable and provides social improvements to the local population.

$2,500,000 to $250,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

We are real estate investors, been investing in real estate for 12 years. We manage and flip properties throughout new england,mostly in MA. We access to buy bulk reo's directly from freddie mack and fannie mae. We invest in singlefamily houses and multy units apartment buildings.We are looking for cash equity and or debt equity partners. We're looking forward to working with you.

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000