New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I've been an FX trader for years and am looking to start my own business or an investment in a good opportunity

$10,000 to $90,000

United States > New York

We are an investor group seeking to invest in innovative ideas, transactions and business opportunities. We have a preference for opportunities that are transformative within their competitive space, and significant growth potential. We have substantial experience investing in and managing real estate, chemical, internet and financial services businesses.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

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$0 to $0

United States > New York

I am an investor into a few industry sectors, primarily real estate and small Business investments. I don't want to put too much money in as anangel investor. But am willing to give someone a chance who doesn't need a lot of money to start and go from there.

$5,000 to $10,000

United States > Pennsylvania

I am a managing partner for 5th ave acquisitions &venture capitalists . I have access to strategic funding sources, private money, and institutional money. Some of that may look like private equity (in other words there is an actual fund ready to fund specific projects) What we do is after reviewing your business plan we will then be able to understand where and how to present your business venture. Whether you want to preserve equity or if you are ok to give up some equity. There are different options that we have available and we create an environment that will give you the best shot at getting funding for your project.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > New Jersey

I am a private lender located here in Verona, New Jersey, We are dedicated to helping you gain financial freedom to permit you to achieve your financial goals without the extra burden that comes along with high rate debt and hard money loans, we are reputable lenders and certified. We are equipped with the necessary resources to attain one common objective, provide you the required loan at just 5% interest rate, we are currently approving and funding.Thanks for your understanding though I await your prompt response so as to get started with your loan fund transaction.

$10,000 to $20,000,000

United States > New York

Experienced business executive sold successful industrial products business and is now looking for new opportunities. BS Industrial Engineering, MBA Finance (Columbia). 10 years merchant banking experience and 15 years in my business. Capital, energy and expertise available. Prefer established business.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

I am an investor in the New York area seeking a business to invest in. i have experience is retail and the food service industry as well as banking and the military. I am really open-minded, hard working, educated and ambitious. I have a degree in Business Management and am pursuing my second degree in the same category. I consider myself as an individual investor, I had dreams of starting my own business however I decided I would like to invest instead. I will consider any reasonable investment opportunity. Ideally, I would like to be partner as opposed to simply an investor

$0 to $20,000