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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Hello, I am a private investor who is a doctor and my wife works for a hedge fund. We are looking for good investment opportunities and look forward to working with you. Thanks

$10,000 to $500,000

United States > New Jersey

I have experience in purchasing real estate.,expereience in the stock Market

$10,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

Entrepreneur, managing director, and general manager at multiple companies

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > Nevada

Our firm was originally incorporated in 1996 as an economic development and information technology consulting firm. The Company has since been re-invented recently incorporated on August 30, 2013. The goal of The Company is to guide small and mid-sized business owners to the next levels of their firm's growth and development. The primary tools for this development are capital funding for real estate and business resources like salaries, inventory and equipment and also, management consulting on how to efficiently control resources and revenue.

$250,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

25 years experience in all phases of financing debt, equity, mezzanine representing private, institutional and state government funds.

$50,000,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Ohio

I am a 29 yr old male who resides in Ohio, NYC, and Florida. I have been self employed since 19. I have owned my own business in the insurance industry(usa) since 2005 and an energy reduction business (international) since 2010. I am an individual investor actively looking for additional business opportunity's in several fields, but do want to limit that the ownership group of the current business be based in the USA. There are currently several types of investments I am looking for. If you are a start up with any new technology I do demand that all needed patent's have been obtained. Another alternative I am actively seeking is any small company/start-up that may have energy saving's technology that would 1) help me to present with my current fortune 500 clients for greater achieved savings goals, but 2) to help allow me to channel your products into the right business owner hands to maximize your/our potential future success.

$1 to $600,000

Canada > Toronto

Founder of a technology company (IT Security space) that was acquired by a Fortune 1000 company, returning over 25x to investors. Actively involved with several early-stage IT security companies as board member, advisory board member, angel investor, etc. Also active in supporting the activities of some venture capital firms.

$10,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Nevada

Looking for a business that I can be integrally involved in yet allow me not to have to micromanage. I am looking for a nice return on my capital and am looking to expand whatever I do internationally. I travel alot and I am only interested in working with individuals who have a Business plan in place. (Fail to plan, plan to fail philosophy here). I have Business experience in High net worth individuals, Entertainment, Real Estate and the stock market. I have also owned a Car dealership and managed portfolios and models. Please contact me with serious inquiries, be very realistic and if you haven't seen the show "SHARK TANK" Hulu it and watch the first 3 episodes so you can understand how I look at VC and Angel Networking investment philosophy. Thank you, Greg

$20,000 to $200,000