New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Hi, My name is Valerio Auguste. I am a private investor. I have been investing for three years in online Marketing Businesses. My main goal is to find the opportunity to invest in new businesses with minimal development done. I am a Math and Science teacher, and I own an online marketing business and its own online stores. My recent projet is the online distribution branch of an enterprise that distributes high quality products both online and offline.

$100 to $100,000

United States > New York

I am live in NYC and married with a few kids. I work as a financial advisor and financial planner. We have a lot of investing in good companies through the stock market and through private investments. I have a very good understanding of cash flow and balance sheets. I am a private investor. We own real estate and we understand that very well. If I have value to add I would be an advisor and sometimes I prefer to be a silent investor.

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > California

I represent a group of private investors that are looking to invest in a green company, location does not matter. They are willing to invest a minimum of 100 million up to 140 million, initially and will fund the whole project . They will have 50% ownership. The group has experience in a variety of fields including telecommunication, large commercial projects, registered investor, wineries/agriculture and business development. Up front, the board requires an executive summary and any other supporting documents. They are in place to move immediately. Thank you

$98,000,000 to $990,000,000

United States > New York

mostly small investments in sports teams and race horses.

$1,000 to $40,000

United States > Hawaii

I deal with a company that will finance your projects with no recourse. Must sign a NCND before I explain the program.

$100,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > New York

We are a national real estate investment firm that provides equity and mezzanine financing to real estate developers (we are principal Investors, not brokers). Our focus is on middle market for sale and rental housing, low income tax credit housing, and community revitalizing commercial projects. With the closing of our latest Fund, we plan to invest $300 million over the next few years in development projects in New York, New Jersey and Connecticut.

$3,000,000 to $100,000,000

Hungary > Budapest

stated as investment banker, became private equity investor and finally angel investor mainly active in media-technology industries with European background, moving to the US

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > California

I possess significant history as an outside investor in a handful of start- ups and businesses seeking expansion capital. Biggest investment was $10 million in a consumer products company based in California. Currently have excess cash on hand and am actively seeking private equity / pre-IPO deals to invest in. I represent a group of seasoned, accredited investors.

$100,000 to $10,000,000