New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

Singapore > Singapore

I'm a young Digital Marketing Expert looking to invest money in consumer facing projects. I have a degree in Business Management and Marketing and 5 years + of experience in the working environment. I have worked for a start-up and am currently working in a start-up business unit within a large company. I work in branding and communications and have experience in all things digital i.e. search, display, ad-serving etc. I also have contacts in clothing and alcohol distribution and import/export. I'm absolutely willing to get hands on with a business if it is a good opportunity and want to work with ambitious people similar to myself.

$1,000 to $10,000

United States > New York

I'm a private investor looking for alternative investments. I've worked in the financial services industry for the last 20 years.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

We are a national real estate investment firm that provides equity and mezzanine financing to real estate developers (we are principal Investors, not brokers). Our focus is on middle market for sale and rental housing, low income tax credit housing, and community revitalizing commercial projects. With the closing of our latest Fund, we plan to invest $300 million over the next few years in development projects in New York, New Jersey and Connecticut.

$3,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > California

Self admitted investor, currently working in entertainment and transportation start-up but am open to other industries

$1 to $25,000

United States > New York

Have profitably invested in start up companies from event ticket brokers to mobile phone distributors. Experience in money management, sales, purchasing, and managerial positions. Private investor.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > New York

Financial professional with experience investing in numerous private transactions.

$5,000 to $500,000

United States > Hawaii

We specialize in commercial working capital solutions. We partner exclusively with stable, bank-backed institutions and top-tier factoring providers to offer highly reliable funding. Our focus is securing non-dilutive lines from $100K to 75M for high-volume Staffing, Manufacturing, and Distribution companies. We help businesses upgrade their capital, securing low-cost, consistent cash flow without taking on debt, ensuring they meet payroll and scale operations efficiently.

$100,000 to $75,000,000

United States > New York

I am a working professional who has been in operational management and consulting for large corporations for over 15 years. I have enjoyed training & developing and have had much success driving sales for my employer. I also have over five years of experience in the bar industry aiding in management and specializing in promotion work.

$5,000 to $30,000