New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I am a doctor and became a self made millionaire at age 33, through building a successful multidisciplinary Corporation of healthcare professionals in The upstate new york region. I am now 39 years old and happily married. since I was very young I had an opportunity to work in my family business since I was about 10 years of age and I got to know what real hard work was and what it took to be successful in life. I would like to share some of that knowledge with other people and help them as well as help myself in the process. I have helped health care professionals as well as a few entrepreneurs start and expand their businesses. I'm an individual investor but also have connections with other colleagues that are also accredited investors. I'm not just someone with monetary resources. I myself above all things, am an entrepreneur and a visionary and proud to be so. I hope to .be involved with other people that share some the same characteristics

$5,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Georgia

We are a leader in innovative financing. We provide start-up and expansion capital for all kinds of companies – even those that traditional lending institutions can't or won't help. Our founders know how difficult it is to find money. They had a great idea, Make getting the money you need for your business simple and easy.

$1,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

I was one of the first employees of Micromuse Inc., a very successful start-up from the 1990's. Micromuse provided network management solutions and was eventually acquired by IBM. My role at Micromuse was VP of Sales and I was the key player in driving our sales into internet service providers, telcos and web hosting companies. I want to provide seed/angel investment funds into companies operating in any high tech field. Depending on the opportunity I am comfortable being either a passive investor or taking a more direct role.

$15,000 to $35,000

United States > New Jersey

We are in search of Strategic opportunities for our network of Private Investors and Private Equity firms. We would like to present your proposal to our network of investors for consideration. If this is of interest to you, contact me with questions, comments or what's the next step in the process. COMMERCIAL: Project Type Rehab / Value-Add Opportunistic Investment Stabilized Properties Loan to Cost Up to 90% Size $500K—$10M Term 12 months—10 years Capital Type Sr. Debt, Pref. Equity, JV Equity RESIDENTIAL: Project Type Short-Term Rehab Refinancing Ground-Up Construction Loan to Cost Up to 90% Size $100K—$10M Term 6—24 months Capital Type Sr. Debt, Pref. Equity

$500,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Illinois

I have 15 years of real estate development experience , Ten years of financial enhancement experience and project funding I'm direct to a large hedge fund that has been in business for over forty years I'm a direct rep to a program manager of a provide placement program (PPP) I have 19 years experience in the real estate tax field and now currently seeking good project to fund .

$5,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Arkansas

Investment Criteria While the merits of each investment will vary, we evaluate your venture according to the following criteria. Management Team We look for teams of high-quality entrepreneurs with a track record of leadership and performance, either in the company's specific industry or in prior entrepreneurial ventures. We also look at your team's passion for and commitment to the new business idea, and your ability to inspire confidence among future stakeholders, including employees, potential customers, and investors. As we will be working together as partners, your team's credibility is essential. In addition, your team must be open to and comfortable with receiving input provided by angel investors. Market Opportunity We invest in solutions that address major problems for significantly large target markets. Your company must demonstrate a strategy to claim significant share of this market.

$100,000 to $600,000,000

United States > Georgia

Private Investor and Group investors.Certified Money Broker. Many years of Investing. Private Funding for your deals! Private Money Brokering for Your Growth.

$500,000 to $160,000,000

United States > New York

33 year old married man, owner of a construction company, cleaning company and supply company, with degree in IT, willing to invest in right inventor and the idea.

$1,000 to $100,000