New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I have seven years of investment experience across a variety of securities, from secured debt to equity, in both public and private companies. I hope to work with early stage companies seeking to disrupt a legacy industry. I am willing to engage in different levels of involvement throughout the process depending on need.

$0 to $50,000

Venezuela > CARACAS

- 40 years old, male, married based in Caracas / Venezuela. - Franchise consultant with more than 15 years in managerial experience in marketing and sales departments in mass consumption companies such as Seagram´s, The Quaker Oats Company, PepsiCo. - Master in Marketing and General Management at MGSM (Macquarie Graduate School of Management - Sydney / Australia.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

Looking for good solid businesses to invest in. Equity preferred will also consider debt. For over 10 years I have used my resources to increase sales, profits and cash flow for businesses.

$25,000 to $2,000,000

United States > New Jersey

Personal Information: 33 years old/married/currently living in Hoboken, NJ. Professional Experience: 12 years of experience in the marketing technology and analytics space. I have worked as a trusted advisor for clients ranging from growth stage to Fortune 50 across a range of industries. I have a proven record of helping my clients grow their business through a combination of consultative and technology based solutions. Anticipated Involvement: Individual investor operating in a hands off/advisory capacity

$10,000 to $750,000

United States > Colorado

we work with immigration group in South Korea and we looking to U.S. project make immigration visa for our client. if you have profit project in regional area which is approve from city, county, state or government for EB5 visa condition with prove official document. we can bring on large investor group to cover on your project less than 50% of total project amount that will be start invest amount with $500,000.00 per client and no limit on investors join in the project with amount and condition of your project. any question please let us know at uscvaxles@gmail.com

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New Jersey

We provide business funding to help start up or expand your business. If you do not have an existing business, we can also help will set one up. Whether you need $1,000 or more than $100,000, we can help you get the funding you require. As a matter of fact, the interest you pay won't be for the amount you are qualified for, but the amount you choose to spend; So for example, we provide you with $100,000, and you only choose to use $25,000, the interest you pay will be the percentage on the used amount; This alone will help you save even more, over the course of your loan. If interested, please do give us a call. We are interested in assisting you in any form possible. Thanks again, and good luck on your business!

$1,000 to $500,000

Turkey > New York

i am 40 years old. i'm individual investor.i live in Turkey. i would like to invest in NYC any interesting project. i have a small company. i have some investments in turkey at various areas. so that will be first time out of my country. i have been in nyc few times. my experience usually wholesale products from east west such as china,india,indonesia.i can be silent investor give to money. or i can attend according to project with some products. sorry my english not enough:) but i have a lawyer in nyc. so he is following my business process.

$10,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

Michael Keane Currently a Precious Metal Analyst at GFI Group B.A. Connecticut College Looking for any type of business/startup in the New York City area to add exposure to my portfolio

$1,000 to $10,000