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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Looking for good solid businesses to invest in. Equity preferred will also consider debt. For over 10 years I have used my resources to increase sales, profits and cash flow for businesses.

$25,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Colorado

Prefer investment range of $20 million to $750 million (US dollars) Debt of equity or combination of debt + equity Prompt and thorough due diligence process Terms and structures arranged with a goal of MUTUAL BENEFIT You and your associates must be honorable and trustworthy, pass background investigations. Best of luck with all your business adventures.

$20,000,000 to $600,000,000

United States > California

My background is in science and technology, with specialties in IT hardware/software and renewable energy. I am especially interested in investment opportunities related to high performance computing and renewable energy. With the right project, funding from various private sources are available for investment.

$5,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

looking a for integrity and talented partner to make the world a better place.

$500,000 to $30,000,000

United States > Arkansas

We are a primarily a commercial development company seeking to invest in businesses in the aviation industry or aviation-related industry.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

We are direct lending groups. We specialize in multifamily, apartment building, strip mall, office building, warehouse and most categories of residential and commercial properties. Alternative energy projects such as wind and solar projects. You will need 1 to 3 page summary for our review. We also fund start-up trucking companies.

$2,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > New York

We are a professional consulting and capital brokerage firm. Our consultants/brokers have excellent academic credentials and have previously worked for top-tier investment banks and consulting firms. Some of us are business owners and therefore directly understand the challenges facing entrepreneurs and C-suite personnel. Our expertise includes: business development plans; corporate growth and product marketing strategies; and capital introduction, for companies of varying sizes. We have working relationships with Private Equity firms, REITs and Accredited investors, in addition to Law firms and Public Relations boutiques (for when the need arises). Companies we have advised, and/or assisted with funding, encompass a broad range of industries.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > New York

My investment objectives are to invest in environmental or green technology companies with brand management that focuses on sustainable development initiatives. My involvement level would be the SEO brand advisor creating and maintaining a web-presence that grows the business, increases market share, strengthens financial performance and improves business to business & customer relationships.

$360,000 to $1,300,000