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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Michigan

I am the founder and Chairman of a venture group. I am a former professional hockey player, venture capitalist and renowned entrepreneur. An early entrant to the cleantech market, our efforts have garnered global recognition his companies awards include Time Magazine's "Best Inventions 2005," and was awarded the Wall Street Journal's "Technology Innovator" and the World Economic Forum's "Technology Pioneer" awards that same year. In early 2007, he was named a "Young Global Leader" by the Forum. Repeated successes has been acknowledged by the global business community. His insight has been sought by such publications as the New York Times, Time Magazine, Inc., Red Herring and the Wall Street Journal. In addition, he is a regular attendee of the World Economic Forum. He holds a bachelor's degree in computer science from Brandon University, in Brandon, Manitoba.

$50,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

25 yrs in Information technology experience as a Vice president in fortune 200 largest financial institutions. An investor in few startups related to education, IT and Medical devices. Looking to pick up investments in the range of 25000- 300000 in all business areas mentioned above. Not interested in interest only paying businesses. Can involve at all levels hands-on, advisory, silent etc. Individual Investor.

$1 to $100,000

United States > Florida

We are a diversified, international service firm helping government and business grow, often into new markets worldwide. Our Investment Bankers specialize in Government and Corporate Finance, Private Equity, and other alternative investment solutions primarily in difficult or emerging market situations.

$5,000,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Pennsylvania

Investment Management/Banking experience with own company. Started a successful alternative energy company that went public and was ultimately sold to a large mid-west utility.

$25,000 to $500,000

United States > Virginia

Objectives would be to invest in start-up or mature businesses. I have no history other than stock investing. I've been a Naval officer for 14 years and I'm a private investor.

$5,000 to $35,000

United States > South Carolina

Private investor or Group investor

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I am a private investor in search of a hands on opportunity. I have been involved in the successful start-ups of a deli, a construction company, and a few bars. The bars included extensive marketing/ and tending bar on my part. Like all investors my main priority is making money. That being said, something fun or helpful to the general public is a close second.

$0 to $10,000

United States > New York

My name is Mozz. I'm a 34 year old guy from Bensonhurst, Brooklyn. I went to school for theater. I've been in sales since I was 17; Phones, Mortgages, Digital Marketing, Advertising, etc. I helped start the leading online news website for the wholesale intimates business. I was also a partner in running an apparel trade show in NYC. I can sell, present, schmooze, entertain, and open people up. I am an excellent judge of character. I listen very well. My days as an actor have taught me to take criticism exceptionally well. I'm a natural leader, and a natural mediator. I'm seeking an opportunity to work with people who think like me, on something I can believe in. I have the time and resources to devote to a great idea.

$1,000 to $75,000