New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Florida

Our investment are primarily in commercial real estate, our background is 20 yrs in real estate investments, I am a private investor.

$25,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

Born and bred in Wisconsin and currently living outside New York City in Westchester County. I have a Masters degree in Fine Arts from the Chicago Art Institute and a Bachelors Degree from the University of Wisconsin at Madison. I have spent almost 20 years in the movie marketing business, working in the trenches cutting trailers and television spots for scores of campaigns. Five years ago I set up my own company here in New York that continues to grow each year. My investment experience is limited to real estate and basic stocks and mutual funds. I'm looking for promising new enterprises to invest in. I'm anticipating little involvement unless the industry is in or near to my own. I could probably be of use if that's the case. Otherwise I'd just leave it to the experts in other fields.

$1 to $25,000

United States > Florida

I have over 15 years of executive-level experience in managing and investing in real estate.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Venezuela > CARACAS

- 40 years old, male, married based in Caracas / Venezuela. - Franchise consultant with more than 15 years in managerial experience in marketing and sales departments in mass consumption companies such as Seagram´s, The Quaker Oats Company, PepsiCo. - Master in Marketing and General Management at MGSM (Macquarie Graduate School of Management - Sydney / Australia.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > Georgia

Commercial Consultant for the past 4 years. Banking for the past nine years. Currently working with commercial financing organization.

$2,500,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Maine

i am a new investor looking for my first few deals, either to buy them at a discount or to match properties with other investors that may not quite fit my portfolio. i have owned several businesses and done some real estate transactions in the past. i am a private investor.

$0 to $200,000

United States > Texas

Self made businessman. Allot of experience in real estate and online businesses. From California and living in Texas currently .Currently working on a renewable energy project that is showing allot of potential.

$25,000 to $200,000

United States > New York

I've owned my own self-funded businesses since 1995. I understand the entrepreneur mentality and drive, and I'm interested in finding some great entrepreneurs to work with and fund, to help them grow... and to earn a solid return on my investments.

$1,000 to $250,000