New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

30 years in the financial Industry helping business owners expand their business. And funding for Real estate projects.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New Jersey

I am new to the business and getting the hang of it. I have closed one deal about a month ago, and looking to close more for the coming year. I do have a partner she is a Realtor/Investor/Mortgagor. We are looking to Wholesale deals, REO buyrers, We can get the properties, but looking for serious buyers that wolud like to buy, and move on to the next project. Need help with funding deals to either fix the property hold or flip

$10,000 to $25,000

United States > Arizona

I work directly with private individuals who have been investing in private funds for over 20 years. We fund almost any type of project and/or business. Terms and investments are on a case by case basis, and may be syndicated amongst our investment partners.

$10,000,000 to $9,000,000,000

United States > New York

I am a doctor and became a self made millionaire at age 33, through building a successful multidisciplinary Corporation of healthcare professionals in The upstate new york region. I am now 39 years old and happily married. since I was very young I had an opportunity to work in my family business since I was about 10 years of age and I got to know what real hard work was and what it took to be successful in life. I would like to share some of that knowledge with other people and help them as well as help myself in the process. I have helped health care professionals as well as a few entrepreneurs start and expand their businesses. I'm an individual investor but also have connections with other colleagues that are also accredited investors. I'm not just someone with monetary resources. I myself above all things, am an entrepreneur and a visionary and proud to be so. I hope to .be involved with other people that share some the same characteristics

$5,000 to $2,000,000

United States > California

Senior Vice President Investment; Master degree, in London,U.K. Real Estate in NYC, and Finance in Beverly Hills; We finance projects in any industry with a strong executive summary; Collateral providers,and investors in hotels and hospitality; Currently we have top qualified clients who need finance of $10M and above; We review their profile and e.s. while provide to them the right guarantees to get the finance, We also encourage bankers and funds who need collateral for their clients to complete deals, we can do so, after they submit the POF and the approval for the principals. Loyalty,integrity,with fast service are some of our principals.

$10,000,000 to $300,000,000

United States > Texas

I represent private investors, JV's, private lenders, investment banks Types of Projects: Start-ups, Property Development, Manufacturing, Vehicle Dealerships, Hotel/Motels, Holiday Resorts, Spas, Emergency Funding.

$250,000 to $600,000,000

United States > Illinois

Operated a business for many years, know HVAC market really well.

$0 to $150,000

United States > Michigan

Looking for investment opportunities to generate capital to help with funding my investment interests.

$100 to $20,000