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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Private / Individual investor and willing to invest in new areas / ideas / business sectors. Basically trying to diversify my investment strategy from CD & stocks to other type of investments. Willing to co-ordinate with Entrepreneurs and help them using my personal contacts, if I like their ideas and have confident that investing on theirs will get certain level of returns over a period of 2 to 5 years.

$100 to $20,000

United States > Missouri

I am a chartered accountant with an MBA from one of the top business schools in Europe. I have worked extensively in the mergers and acquisition space. Worked with start-ups, turnaround and restructuring situations both in emerging markets and developed markets. Have experience in the US, European and African markets. I have started and sold several businesses. I am currently involved in roll ups in the financial services, oil and gas as well as manufacturing space

$300,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Florida

I have 24 years in the Investment Banking Business. My objective is to build up and devote full time in the venture i get involved with. My specialty is M/A. I have clients all around the world that i have done many M/A transactions. I am a private investor that is willing to invest my own capital. I also have access to all my contacts all over the world. I have raised over 300 million for venture capital deals in the past. My goal is to invest my capital and raise the value of the company and sell it off to some of my groups that are looking to acquire profitable companies out of the country.

$25,000 to $400,000

United Kingdom > London

I am an individual in touch with may consultants and finance contacts in London. I am looking for projects in India, USA, Europe, Middle East that require funding. Even 100% funding requirements may be looked at. Please contact me provide that you have all the feasibility reports, information on the income stream and how the investors will get their money back clearly written out to me. The IRR, Pay Back period and the information on the sponsors needs to be available with all the experience clearly written to convince the financers that this is a good project worth while investing in. Hotel projects/ Real Eastate projects/ Cement projects are of interest to the financiers.

$20,000,000 to $90,000,000

United States > New York

I am seeking opportunities to invest in small businesses, real estate, and/or restaurants in NYC. Depending on the investment, I will also gladly serve in an advisory capacity, as well as research and development. My hands-on involvement will largely depend on the type of investment, but I would require regular and frequent status reports/updates.

$500 to $5,000

United States > New York

We are looking for investment deals.

$100,000 to $500,000

United States > California

I work for a fund that invests in small cap and emerging companies to fund media and PR campaigns in return for equity.

$1,000,000 to $25,000,000

United States > California

I represent serious European Investor with $5,000,000. Can call me or email me. Actively looking right now.

$30,000 to $5,000,000