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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

- 36 year-old single woman with Asian background who has lived in 3 continents over the last 15 years (Asia, Australasia, Americas) - Corporate Executive in a large American Multinational Company with more than 60B annual revenue - Masters degree in commerce & BA in Economics - Invest in real estate and stocks currently - 10 years experience working, living and investing in China - Silent investor with advisory and hands-on optional if I can offer value - Individual investor

$50,000 to $150,000

United States > California

Recent: July 2006 – Present, Managing Director of a Capital Group We provide a select array of debt financing solutions critical to the growth of middle-market and emerging growth companies looking to leverage their cash and equity to acquire debt for equipment or growth capital. We understand the relation between your company's cash and equity, where the key to success is conserving both and having access to additional sources of capital for capital expenditures. The key to our success is having the resources, the insight and the talent to extract the highest value from your business assets and being able to leverage them to facilitate a loan to achieve maximum growth and profitability.

$5,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Colorado

I am the owner of a restaurant delivery business looking to invest in new and exciting opportunities. I am a private investor.

$500 to $30,000

United States > California

Full length feature film investments only. DO NOT TELEPHONE! Contact by email only.

$25,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

I am an MBA and CFA charterholder with 5+ years in Equity Research and and Corporate Finance. Currently working for a Fortune 100 financial se services company based in NYC. Looking to invest in a small business and c contribute exceptional strategic thinking and financial discipline.

$0 to $50,000

United States > New York

MBA - Finance Undergrad - MIS & Strategic Management Wharton educated Tech & Finance background, entrepreneurial spirit, analytical, and strategic thinker. Require hands-on involvement in potential investment.

$0 to $500,000

United States > Texas

Personal - I am married, with 3 kids living in El Paso Tx Professional - I have over 25 years of experience in running companies and startup up situations. I was a Senior VP running 4 divisions for a Fortune 150 company. My divisions had sales of over $2B and 30K employees. Education - I have a Bachelors in Business Finance and Accounting Investment Experience - I have started two companies growing both from nothing to profitable businesses. The last venture was in the music business. I took on managing very famous latin singer's. The business went from the red into the black in just 1 years. Other - Every position or company I have worked with has improved financial because of my involvement. I am hands on and will only invest if I believe I can add more value than just financial resources

$100,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

Angel investor with a professional banking background

$1 to $20,000