New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I have been an entrepreneur for over 10 years, having been involved in more than 5 startups - some successful, some not. My experience is primarily in High Tech but my professional credentials are in Marketing and general management.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > Florida

I am a recent college graduate that has been managing my family's finances and assisting in investment ideas for the past 5 years. I'm seeking a talented individual or group of individuals who has great ideas and seeks financing.

$20,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

I am a 44 year old college educated male with money to invest. I would like to take a hands on approach for any potential investment opportunity that one might have

$25,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

We are an investor group seeking to invest in innovative ideas, transactions and business opportunities. We have a preference for opportunities that are transformative within their competitive space, and significant growth potential. We have substantial experience investing in and managing real estate, chemical, internet and financial services businesses.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

Graduate from NYU Stern with a degree on Finance. Currently work as equity long/short analyst managing a $300mm portfolio of investments.

$1,000 to $50,000

Singapore > Singapore

I'm a young Digital Marketing Expert looking to invest money in consumer facing projects. I have a degree in Business Management and Marketing and 5 years + of experience in the working environment. I have worked for a start-up and am currently working in a start-up business unit within a large company. I work in branding and communications and have experience in all things digital i.e. search, display, ad-serving etc. I also have contacts in clothing and alcohol distribution and import/export. I'm absolutely willing to get hands on with a business if it is a good opportunity and want to work with ambitious people similar to myself.

$1,000 to $10,000

United States > New York

Limited investment history, work as an actuary in a fortune 500. Private investor.

$10,000 to $50,000

Turkey > New York

i am 40 years old. i'm individual investor.i live in Turkey. i would like to invest in NYC any interesting project. i have a small company. i have some investments in turkey at various areas. so that will be first time out of my country. i have been in nyc few times. my experience usually wholesale products from east west such as china,india,indonesia.i can be silent investor give to money. or i can attend according to project with some products. sorry my english not enough:) but i have a lawyer in nyc. so he is following my business process.

$10,000 to $50,000