New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New Jersey

Commercial Real Estate, Development, Bridge Financing, Debt, Equity Minimum due diligence, quick financing with non traditional requirements

$300,000 to $25,000,000

United States > Florida

I have been working as an investment analyst for a Hedge Fund for the past 3 years. I have recently decided to become involved with my family business and we are looking to expand our operations through new investment opportunities.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

United States > New York

27 years old, single, grad student in NYC. I am looking to invest or for a business partner who wants to start a business. You must have capital and/or solid idea. I have $50.000 saved.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

I represent a fundraising group for start-up companies as well as existing corporations seeking to expand their capital. We can work with companies eager to raise capital through regulation crowd funding and filing all SEC forms and regulations. Raise anywhere from $20,000 - $5M. We charge NO upfront costs, only 4% fee if your fundraise is successful. We offer free contracts and personal support throughout. My occupational background is as an accountant/financial advisor for the past 20 years including 10 years as a corporate controller. I am also a real estate investor and currently own and manage four investment properties under my real estate corporation.

$100,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > Georgia

Serial entrepreneur. Group investor. Former broker, registered principal. Owned a successful international venture consulting business.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Florida

I have been in the real-estate investment business for more than twenty years.

$25,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

I have been in the Commercial Lending business for 14 years. I have relationships with over 35 different lenders specializing in: - Bridge Loans - Hard Money Lending - Apartments and Commercial complexes - Construction and Developments -Joint Ventures - Will Consider ALL Loans I have rates as low as 6.75% with 3 points on commercial Loans. I can do loans as high as 75% LTV and have Super Fast Turnarounds. I have placed loans as much as 9 Billion Dollars and have hard to do loans such as: - Casinos - Oil Refineries - Hotel Construction and Development - Puerto Rico Commercial Development - Bio Diesel Plants - TV Stations Let me place your Hard to Do Loans!! I will consider ALL loans between $10 Million and multi Billion Dollars.

$1,000,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > Colorado

We are a team of people looking for investors for the business we are trying to purchase . Members on this team are experts in their area of the business. We have members with degrees in business management as well. One team member holds an import and export licenses, and a business licenses. With the investor investing in the business, we have a goal to pay the investor back in less then 2 years, with a profit to the investor. The investor will receive back as much as they invest. So if the investor invested 10 million, the investor would receive 20 million back. We as a team want to create jobs for the community around the business. This business holds up to 1,500 people and the gross income made would be 20 million to 30 million a year. We are very excited to help people get off unemployment, welfare, and homeless. Create scholarships for kids, donate meat to charity's to help feed homeless, and in shelters for other reasons. Thank you

$5,000,000 to $10,000,000