New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Massachusetts

PhD in Business Administration with global experience in senior corporate positions. Looking for investments that can deliver 50% in 3 years. Real Estate investments >$2,000,000 Start-ups >$500,000 Grow >$500,000

$50,000 to $1,000,000

Canada > Toronto

I'm currently a private investor. I have been investing in a large construction company in Alberta, Canada. This company has given me great returns on investment. Since then I have continued to invest in other companies. I hold a B.A in business marketing from the university of waterloo.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > California

I represent serious European Investor with $5,000,000. Can call me or email me. Actively looking right now.

$30,000 to $5,000,000

United States > New York

I'm a private investor who recently moved to New York city from London. I'm a consultant working for a professional services firm and I'm looking for interesting and profitable business opportunities in which to invest my savings and perhaps provide guidance or input if required.

$500 to $5,000

United Kingdom > New York

The author of an investment column which became a forum for publicizing personal stock investment methodology. Began his career as a chartered accountant and then moved into corporate managerial positions from 1975 to 1985 with three different U.K. manufacturing firms. what really matters to us is what would like us to do for you and what we enjoy doing is figuring out how best we can assist you in a way that makes your like so much easier. our aim is to offer you something you've never had before. In our experience you generally want any matters relating to money and investing made simple, low cost and easy to understand. You also want someone on the end of the phone to explain things when you're not sure. You want to be able to speak to someone when you need to. If this is beginning to sound like the sort of helpful service you could benefit from then great.

$50,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

As an owner of a commercial finance company, I have access to a large pool of capital that businesses can leverage without giving up equity in their business. Not to mention, traditional bank underwriters don't always understand or respect future growth as they always look at historical data to make their decisions. I am uniquely positioned to help entrepreneurs with their funding needs by utilizing resources at my disposal.

$5,000 to $500,000,000

United States > New York

The firm I represent is looking for asset heavy opportunities through which a mix of asset backed financing and some equity could be provided. We're flexible and typically stay out of management's way allowing them to run the business without interference. We prefer investments in the U.S. and Western Europe but will consider other geographic areas. I personally have 10 years of investment banking and financial advisory experience with a primary focus on middle market activities.

$10,000,000 to $150,000,000

United States > Mississippi

I am an investor that likes to lend money on solid deals and can also do invoice factoring. I have a number of properties for investors also. I really like putting deals together.

$10,000 to $100,000,000