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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Illinois

Several years in the Real Estate business as a investor and land lord I deal with a lot of Section 8 tenants, Ive done new constructions, buy & hold and flips. I know a good deal when I see it. Its all about the numbers and exit strategy!!

$100,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New Jersey

Private investor looking for new prospects to make good returns. Investment history in real estate professionally employed in the Insurance Industry.

$1,000 to $10,000

United States > New York

Michael Keane Currently a Precious Metal Analyst at GFI Group B.A. Connecticut College Looking for any type of business/startup in the New York City area to add exposure to my portfolio

$1,000 to $10,000

United States > New York

Risk taking person. Ready for everything

$1,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

looking a for integrity and talented partner to make the world a better place.

$500,000 to $30,000,000

Georgia > Tbilisi

Seasoned executive with 20+ years of experience in finance industry. While living in Georgia, I'm Looking for opportunities for investment outside the country. I have MBA degree from IE Business School. Looking forward to receive interesting proposals.

$50,000 to $200,000

United States > New York

Hi. I'm based in Stamford CT, but am originally from New Zealand. I have managed Food and Beverage CPG and manufacturing businesses as CEO in 7 countries. I have operated businesses from 1 employee to over 2000 people; from my own start-ups to parts of global multinationals; from internet to supermarket channels. I speak Spanish and English. My key expertise is in brands and marketing, though having been CEO several times, I can apply myself to any area of a business. Vision, strategy, leadership are all strengths of mine. I have a keen interest in anything food related - from restaurants to import/export, to manufacturing and marketing brands. I am looking to be a Director and/or be in an advisory capacity with individual investment interest. I look forward to hearing from you.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > Wisconsin

I have broad manufacturing experience with a few small ventures of my own in the past. I've worked in consumer packaging, tool and die, foundry equipment, metal fabrication for industrial equipment and most recently in Long Term Care making products for nursing homes that were both simple medical devices as described by the FDA and non- medical devices. I've been building business cases for new product development and new product introductions as part of my current role and have traveled to Asia and Mexico for design reviews and production approvals. I'm looking to take my 10 years of product development, international sourcing and marketing experience along with my manufacturing experience to a more flexible, dynamic and agressive environment. I'd like to be part of something that has higher potential than standard returns and willing to take calculated risks to get there.

$10,000 to $100,000