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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Washington

Private Investor

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

Seeking quality investments in profitable mid-size companies. Transaction size: $15m to $100m.

$3,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

25 yrs in Information technology experience as a Vice president in fortune 200 largest financial institutions. An investor in few startups related to education, IT and Medical devices. Looking to pick up investments in the range of 25000- 300000 in all business areas mentioned above. Not interested in interest only paying businesses. Can involve at all levels hands-on, advisory, silent etc. Individual Investor.

$1 to $100,000

United States > Illinois

My firm takes private companies public by reverse merger. We have 140 IPO's and reverse mergers in our history, that include: Groupon for 700mm, GNC for 495mm, Spirit Airlines for 159mm, Dunkin Donuts for 640mm. Our Large Cap program has been retooled for small private companies. If you need to raise over 5mm, please contact us immediately. We will pay for every expense related to a public launch, and supply all legal work, at no cost to our clients. We take our fee in stock only. We are 100% vested in your public fundraising success. We offer a true "Public Launch Partnership"

$50,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > New York

Hi. I'm based in Stamford CT, but am originally from New Zealand. I have managed Food and Beverage CPG and manufacturing businesses as CEO in 7 countries. I have operated businesses from 1 employee to over 2000 people; from my own start-ups to parts of global multinationals; from internet to supermarket channels. I speak Spanish and English. My key expertise is in brands and marketing, though having been CEO several times, I can apply myself to any area of a business. Vision, strategy, leadership are all strengths of mine. I have a keen interest in anything food related - from restaurants to import/export, to manufacturing and marketing brands. I am looking to be a Director and/or be in an advisory capacity with individual investment interest. I look forward to hearing from you.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I am a Private Investor who looks for projects that offer Durable Competitive Advantage and that I can offer not only my financial assistance but yet my edcuation and experiences in business development. I am a former Fire Protection Specialist from the Department of Homeland Security. My ability to invest comes from consistant profitable returns on family investments leaving me the ability to invest in others and new businesses. I have a Bacholers of Science Degree in Safety and Environmental Engineering.

$10,000,000 to $45,000,000

United States > Florida

I am investing for a private group.

$1 to $100,000

United States > New York

- recipient of 1999 "Ernst & Young Entrepreneurship Award" - successfully sold telecom company to 2nd largest mobile phone operator in 2001 - purchased & retains exclusive development rights for johnny rockets in NY metro area - active guest speaker for Fordham, NYU, Columbia entrepreneurship programs - actively incubating concepts including iphone development team and first large scale eco-friendly casino resort in EU

$100,000 to $5,000,000