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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

Venezuela > Caracas

45 Years Old, Married, Living in Venezuela, travelling frequently to the US, Miami and New York City. Entrepreneur since 14 years old. In the food industry for the las 20 years (Both Fast and Slow Food). At the present, owner of the most important take out restaurant of Caracas. Some experience in both Real State and Financial. Will be involved as a Silent Investor or Partner. Individual Investor.

$1,000 to $250,000

United States > Washington D.C.

Private Lending Provides Hard money Commercial Real Estate Loans, Account Receivable Finance, Film Finance, Stock Hedge Loans, Equity Loans of all Kinds. All Loan Types Business Loans Accounts Receivable Financing Asset Based Lending Loan Bridge Loan Business Credit Card Equipment Financing Loan Franchise Loan Hard Money Loan Inventory Financing Loan Factoring Invoice Line of Credit under $100K Line of Credit over $100K Retail/Merchant Cash Advance SBA Loan Term Loan Unsecured Business Loan over 25K Unsecured Business Loan Under 25K Working Capital Loan Equipment Leasing Office Equipment Phone Equipment

$10,000 to $9,000,000,000

United States > Florida

Licensed Home Improvement Supplier/General Contractor looking for lucrative real estate opportunities. We will buy land, residential or commercial space, rehab and sell off. Interested parties should have contacts or active deals in place. Additional funds available.

$50,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

28 year old, engaged Male located in Brooklyn NY. Worked last five years as an Independent Consultant solving large decisions for companies about their future. Bachelors Degree in Mathematics with a strong understanding of finance. I would plan to be a silent investor with possibly some advisory role as needed, do not want to interfere.

$500 to $5,000

United States > New York

15 years in investing in real estate development. 15 years owning Mortgage companies 15 years owning and operating, consulting,advisement of real estate Own and operate real estate funding company Teach, consult, mentor real estate entrepreneurs

$10,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Nevada

Internet entreprneur, lead generation, online and mobile marekting, various investments

$10,000 to $10,000,000

India > Gurgaon

Our job is to help you succeed at whatever you’re looking to do.We Love Small Business. It’s Our Passion.We take our A+ rating with the Better Business Bureau very seriously. After nearly a decade of helping business owners and entrepreneurs across the US, we consider our ability to maintain an A+ rating an accomplishment worth sharing. Our Programs Startup Funding, Unsecured Finance,SBA Loans,Equipment Finance,Revenue Loans,Business Express Loans,Retirement Funding,Crowd Funding,Private Investors,Franchise Funding.

$5,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Texas

Private investor Past investments : Real Estate : Travel Industry

$25,000 to $200,000