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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Texas

I represent a group of private investors who will fund just about any viable project.

$5,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > Tennessee

Mostly real estate. Self employed for 15 yrs. Now works for an Airline. Looking to invest for a better return.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Pennsylvania

Looking to purchase high end real estate. Also looking to finance large real estate transactions.

$1,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > North Carolina

I am 27 years old, recently married, living in Raleigh, NC. My primary career is in mental health; I have both a BA and MA in psychology, and several years of administrative experience. With regards to Commercial Funding, I am an Independent Consultant for an organization that works directly with a group of investors who are interested in business development and expansion plans requiring between $250k-$500mil in funding. Although I am new to investing, the group of investors I represent has over 20 years of experience, and the team I have been trained by has over 10 years of experience in the industry. We look forward to helping you pursue your future endeavors.

$250,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Florida

I have 20 + years background in real estate lending including equity,senior debt, subordinated debt and preferred equity & asset acquisitions. Began in hospitality industry 35 years ago but have exclusively been in real estate investments for the past 20 +years. Consider most sectors including real estate.

$1,000,000 to $90,000,000

United States > New York

Fund I and Fund II invests in early stage broad based technologies and medical device companies utilizing its earned value milestone-based investment approach. As a lead or co-lead investor we aim to build strong financial discipline and operational execution to achieve sound business fundamentals through its earned value milestone investments to quantify enhanced valuations. In May 2012, the firm launched Fund II to make new investments in early stage companies with keen focus on Healthcare Technology, Medical Device, Wireless, Mobile, and Cloud Computing SaaS (Software as a Service) companies.

$1,000,000 to $5,000,000

United States > New York

For the past 9 years, I have held corporate positions in various industries including consulting, technology, retail and consumer goods. I look forward to meeting with talented entrepreneurs who can provide great investment opportunities.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New Jersey

I am 38 and have vast experience in finance. I have completed my BS in Commerce, MS in IT and executive MBA.

$100 to $50,000