New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

40yrs old, married individual investor. Started and currently own 3 companies. Started first company in 2001 (still own and operate). Have consulted other start ups and struggling businesses which have become profitable. College educated. Multiple contacts in the WNY area. Prefer to be a hands on/advisory type of investor.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

New York lawyer in late 20s specializing in litigation. Looking to invest in a Manhattan nightclub or bar opening or remodeling by summer 2011. Ideally, the venue will be small-scale (300 capacity or less) and have an original or emerging concept. Willing to invest up to $100k in exchange for a percentage of ownership in venue.

$10,000 to $100,000

Costa Rica > San José

Entrepreneurial General Manager with diverse commercial, planning, operational and human resource development experience within the shipping, reefer and fresh produce industry. Lead operational and commercial planning to attain and exceed corporate goals in a range of geographies, business requirements and in diverse economic climates and customer needs. Global Experience: Executive with +20 years of experience who built a long term career at Chiquita Brands International (CBI) and its subsidiary Great White Fleet (GWF). Chiquita is a leading global company that produces high-quality fresh food products. Great White Fleet is Chiquita’s shipping arm and cargo carrier that provides ocean freight and intermodal transportation services.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > Oregon

I am 28 years of age and am looking to invest in new, developing and mature enterprises. I am new to investing in businesses so I would at first like a hands off approach, if you feel you need a partner as well as an investor then I would be happy to see how I could best fit your business plan. I look forward to working with you in the future and helping facilitate your goals.

$5,000 to $200,000

United States > Arkansas

Investment Criteria While the merits of each investment will vary, we evaluate your venture according to the following criteria. Management Team We look for teams of high-quality entrepreneurs with a track record of leadership and performance, either in the company's specific industry or in prior entrepreneurial ventures. We also look at your team's passion for and commitment to the new business idea, and your ability to inspire confidence among future stakeholders, including employees, potential customers, and investors. As we will be working together as partners, your team's credibility is essential. In addition, your team must be open to and comfortable with receiving input provided by angel investors. Market Opportunity We invest in solutions that address major problems for significantly large target markets. Your company must demonstrate a strategy to claim significant share of this market.

$100,000 to $600,000,000

United States > New Jersey

Private investor looking for new prospects to make good returns. Investment history in real estate professionally employed in the Insurance Industry.

$1,000 to $10,000

United States > New York

Young, professional and motivated real estate investor looking for investment opportunities. At the moment, I currently acquire properties (off-market, foreclosure, short sale negotiations, auctions, etc.) renovate and resell. I work with a group of investors who are eager and ready to generate passive cash flow through outside ventures. Looking for ventures where we can either be silent partners or have some involvement in the business as we have experience in various industries (architecture, law, private lending, contracting, etc.).

$0 to $1,000,000

United States > California

Spent 20 year investing in cellular, MMDS and SMR phone companies

$45,000 to $400,000