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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Washington D.C.

Lawyer in Washington, DC software analysis Vice-President Capital Management (CFTC Registration Hedge Fund), VP US Securities and Exchange Commission, Special Counsel

$50,000 to $1,500,000

United States > New York

15 years in investing in real estate development. 15 years owning Mortgage companies 15 years owning and operating, consulting,advisement of real estate Own and operate real estate funding company Teach, consult, mentor real estate entrepreneurs

$10,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New Jersey

27 years experience in real estate management and acquisition.

$10,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > New York

Venture Capital professional with entrepreneurial skills and experience, launched 5 companies within past 15 years. Looking to support early stage ventures that are technically interesting and have enthusiastic leaders.

$50,000 to $2,000,000

United States > New York

Thirty years of diversified transactions in venture capital, private equity, investment banking, leveraged buyouts, and corporate takeovers. Currently represent group of private investors. We prefer to have board representation on and provide management services to investee companies.

$500,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Texas

Personal - I am married, with 3 kids living in El Paso Tx Professional - I have over 25 years of experience in running companies and startup up situations. I was a Senior VP running 4 divisions for a Fortune 150 company. My divisions had sales of over $2B and 30K employees. Education - I have a Bachelors in Business Finance and Accounting Investment Experience - I have started two companies growing both from nothing to profitable businesses. The last venture was in the music business. I took on managing very famous latin singer's. The business went from the red into the black in just 1 years. Other - Every position or company I have worked with has improved financial because of my involvement. I am hands on and will only invest if I believe I can add more value than just financial resources

$100,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Virginia

I am 51 years, married and live Aldie, VA I am a Lead Information Security office at Navy Federal Credit Union I am currently the Commercial Director of Blues-Solar UK I have an MSc degree in Finance and Information Systems. I have invested $100000 in Blues -Solar Ltd over the last 4 years.

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I'm single living in New Jersey. I own a trucking company. I graduated from Rutgers with a Masters degree in Business. I have done some small investments with great success looking to make larger investments do not want to be hands on but if needed. I am willing to use all my resources to see that they are successful.

$200,000 to $1,000,000