New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I am 32. Live in NYC. I am married, i have children. I have been a member of the New York Angels for 3 years. I have invested in over 50 start-ups through the NYA. I have an investment in a private funds which operate in the CIS. The fund invests in agriculture in Russia and Ukraine. I play an active role in the management of said fund and its business activities. I also invest family capital in real estate within the 50 states.

$5,000 to $25,000

United States > New York

Married couple with high buisness interest seeking to get involved in fun buisness with people we enjoy working. Looking for a long term vision to build wealth.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Nevada

Very motivated and want to be directly involved .

$100,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

I worked as a real estate consultant at Morgan Stanley for several years before opening up a retail/restaurant and real estate consulting firm. I have worked with many national real estate investors as well as numerous 2-star NYC restaurants. References are available upon request. I do not charge a retainer fee and you will receive 100% personal service. I have access to more than $500,000,000 in REAL money - no broker chains - direct access.

$500,000 to $200,000,000

United States > Connecticut

President of a national real estate acquisitions and financing firm specializing in residential and commercial real estate. Our business model allows us to effortlessly find properties for clients looking to acquire properties 70% loan to value or below. If the numbers make sense for a deal I can do it. So I am highly familiar with the investment process.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

I am a working professional who has been in operational management and consulting for large corporations for over 15 years. I have enjoyed training & developing and have had much success driving sales for my employer. I also have over five years of experience in the bar industry aiding in management and specializing in promotion work.

$5,000 to $30,000

United States > Iowa

Ask me to send you my résumé.

$50,000 to $500,000

Canada > Medicine Hat

I am single, age is 40 and location is Canada. Anticipated involvement is advisory Status is I represent a group of venture capitalists/investors

$50,000 to $1,000,000