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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > North Carolina

I am a Chemical Engineer that has been on the business side of our various companies for 30 years. We have bought and sold three businesses, two of which were chemical manufacturing faclities with values of 8 figures. We are looking for someone that can bring new products to our operation and we would offer an equity position for any new products added as they become profitable. We have the facility and financing and need additional ideas. We are located on the coast of NC.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

looking a for integrity and talented partner to make the world a better place.

$500,000 to $30,000,000

United States > New York

15 year Equity Markets Trader and Portfolio Manager. Finance Cash flows and payment streams. Invest in early stage companies/ Venture capital/ Angel Investing Real Estate projects and finance. Investing for personal portfolio as well as on behalf of several additional Angels. Please feel free to contact for various ventures and business opportunities. Always open for discussing your needs. Looking for win/win deals for all.

$2,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Illinois

Banking investment history also starting multiple companies.

$100,000 to $3,500,000

United States > New Jersey

Commercial Real Estate, Development, Bridge Financing, Debt, Equity Minimum due diligence, quick financing with non traditional requirements

$300,000 to $25,000,000

United States > New York

Looking for development projects, overseas

$1,000,000 to $80,000,000

United States > North Carolina

JV Equity Partnership Corporation brings all the funds to your project, as well as Engineering, Advisory and Marketing expertise as needed. We specialize in humanitarian projects nationwide. Our mission is to create new jobs all around the world, through our acquisitions & JV Partnerships. We JV & Acquire mostly projects, with the following discipline: Energy, Transportation, Hospitality, Housing, Aviation, Shipping, Cancer Research, and Shopping Centers. The acquisitions take from 90 -120 days to close and do not require up front fees. Looking to find and help get funded 3-5 suitable projects per month.

$50,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > California

Married living in California with business in IT and Construction.

$1,000 to $60,000