New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Private / Individual investor and willing to invest in new areas / ideas / business sectors. Basically trying to diversify my investment strategy from CD & stocks to other type of investments. Willing to co-ordinate with Entrepreneurs and help them using my personal contacts, if I like their ideas and have confident that investing on theirs will get certain level of returns over a period of 2 to 5 years.

$100 to $20,000

United States > New York

39 year old, married, based in Tribeca, Manhattan. Worked as an institutional investment broker for 11 yrs then as a trader for a big hedge fund / family office for the last 7 yrs. BSc in Business Administration and MSc in Capital Markets. Would like to change career, using the personal wealth that's currently invested in multiple funds, and grow the business together.

$1 to $250,000

United States > New Jersey

- Seeking as a partner/investor/employee/active role in day to day company operation. Semi-retired investor. - Innovative and persistent problem solver, who thrives on challenges, and gets the job done. - Strong, empower leader and motivator, well organized and thorough planner, risk management, dealing effectively across all levels of the organization. - Insightful , profit-driven and hands-on Product/Program and Market Management leader with a proven history of success in bringing technology product, network services and solutions to world-wide market – life cycle execution. - Expertise in developing business plans, price and licensing plans, market strategies with marketing and promotional tools for products and services; team builder and led teams for engineering and development, marketing organization. - Expertise in Computer Systems Application, Wireless Networks, Mobile Application, Managed Network Services, Network and System Integration and Deployment.

$10,000 to $100,000

United Arab Emirates > Dubai

We are an early, intermediate and later stage investor interested in significant equity participation. We invest in privately held companies that are looking for: - Expansion capital for emerging growth companies, - Mezzanine financing, - Strategic mergers and acquisitions, - Special situation funding. Our team consists of active entrepreneurs and professionals with financial, management and technical expertise. They have over 70 years of combined real world experiences in actively starting, building, managing and supporting companies. Management team members have been involved in a variety of businesses in diverse areas such as management, accounting, investments, insurance, sales & marketing, strategic development, corporate consultancy, training & development. We are a Group Investor.

$500,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Colorado

We are a team of people looking for investors for the business we are trying to purchase . Members on this team are experts in their area of the business. We have members with degrees in business management as well. One team member holds an import and export licenses, and a business licenses. With the investor investing in the business, we have a goal to pay the investor back in less then 2 years, with a profit to the investor. The investor will receive back as much as they invest. So if the investor invested 10 million, the investor would receive 20 million back. We as a team want to create jobs for the community around the business. This business holds up to 1,500 people and the gross income made would be 20 million to 30 million a year. We are very excited to help people get off unemployment, welfare, and homeless. Create scholarships for kids, donate meat to charity's to help feed homeless, and in shelters for other reasons. Thank you

$5,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

25 yrs in Information technology experience as a Vice president in fortune 200 largest financial institutions. An investor in few startups related to education, IT and Medical devices. Looking to pick up investments in the range of 25000- 300000 in all business areas mentioned above. Not interested in interest only paying businesses. Can involve at all levels hands-on, advisory, silent etc. Individual Investor.

$1 to $100,000

Canada > Toronto

We can assist our clients to go public in a structure that provides them with the means to dramatically increase the owners value, raise capital and aid in the growth of the business. We also represent public companies seeking acquisition candidates and work with private companies looking to go public through merger with an existing public shell. We can assist clients to raise capital and selectively may invest capital in our own transactions as principals or by investment through an investment fund. We can assist corporate clients with several ways of raising new capital to expand operations, facilitate or complete new product lines, expand geographic coverage and make acquisitions and/or implement other corporate strategies that will increase and maximize the company’s and thus the owner’s value.

$500,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Texas

A Company that has been around since 2007 as a financial resource provider for commercial, residential real estate investors and business owner seeking capital.

$100,000 to $1,000,000,000