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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Fund I and Fund II invests in early stage broad based technologies and medical device companies utilizing its earned value milestone-based investment approach. As a lead or co-lead investor we aim to build strong financial discipline and operational execution to achieve sound business fundamentals through its earned value milestone investments to quantify enhanced valuations. In May 2012, the firm launched Fund II to make new investments in early stage companies with keen focus on Healthcare Technology, Medical Device, Wireless, Mobile, and Cloud Computing SaaS (Software as a Service) companies.

$1,000,000 to $5,000,000

United States > California

Recent: July 2006 – Present, Managing Director of a Capital Group We provide a select array of debt financing solutions critical to the growth of middle-market and emerging growth companies looking to leverage their cash and equity to acquire debt for equipment or growth capital. We understand the relation between your company's cash and equity, where the key to success is conserving both and having access to additional sources of capital for capital expenditures. The key to our success is having the resources, the insight and the talent to extract the highest value from your business assets and being able to leverage them to facilitate a loan to achieve maximum growth and profitability.

$5,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

My background is in technology, and now I am looking to expand my portfolio with local investments.

$5,000 to $250,000

Canada > Toronto

Founder of a technology company (IT Security space) that was acquired by a Fortune 1000 company, returning over 25x to investors. Actively involved with several early-stage IT security companies as board member, advisory board member, angel investor, etc. Also active in supporting the activities of some venture capital firms.

$10,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Kansas

My name is Trevor and I have been in business all my life. I am part owner of an office/supply store and the sole owner of Calvin Well Service, LLC. (Oil & Gas industry). I have invested from $500 dollars in some cases up to $20,000 in others. I have a top of the line accounting team that can handle any situation that arises. I am looking to be a silent partner, but want the capabilities to see how the business is doing at any time I desire. I am currently an individual investor, but have a small group capable of investing $100,000 if needed. I am currently looking to invest in smaller amounts due to the short time involved with this website.

$1 to $15,000

Anguilla > n/a

Angel Investor seeking expansion projects for 45/55 joint venture relationship. The Caribbean Region is preference, other Regions may be considered. We are seeking hotels, Resorts, leisure, apartments etc, damaged by hurricane or natural disasters, or hotels that already existing. We are willing to invest as low as $5 million USD to $20 million USD.

$5,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New York

over 25 years in general business experience with a focus on strategic sales, marketing, business development and financial issues, executed inside early and growth-stage companies. As an executive and a management consultant he has been actively involved in founding, funding, and building both private and public companies concentrating on data visualization, web services, new media and network security. Also experienced in construction and light manufacturing.

$20,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

Successful entrepreneur, built and sold 3 companies. Have been a strategic investor for the past 10 years...

$50,000 to $5,000,000