New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I am an MBA and CFA charterholder with 5+ years in Equity Research and and Corporate Finance. Currently working for a Fortune 100 financial se services company based in NYC. Looking to invest in a small business and c contribute exceptional strategic thinking and financial discipline.

$0 to $50,000

Canada > Thornhill

Represent a business development firm, willing to help new clients in the media and technology space. Contact me for additional detail.

$500,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Florida

I work as an independent broker in Cape Coral, Florida. We provide funding for all types of businesses and various circumstances.

$250,000 to $50,000,000

United States > New York

I'm a no nonsense type guy. What you see is what you get. I believe in competition, as it lets everyone be their best and either sink or swim. I live in New York and am looking to invest in a business. If you have something worth my time, don't hesitate to send me a message and we can set up a meeting.

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I am live in NYC and married with a few kids. I work as a financial advisor and financial planner. We have a lot of investing in good companies through the stock market and through private investments. I have a very good understanding of cash flow and balance sheets. I am a private investor. We own real estate and we understand that very well. If I have value to add I would be an advisor and sometimes I prefer to be a silent investor.

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

very successful, ,. retail,. automotive stock market etc somewhat sane, like to see other people succeed, good luck to all,. let the games begin,, ps life is short, go for it, ron

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New Jersey

Our small brokerage/VC group has wide network connections with funding sources of different flavors.

$10,000,000 to $300,000,000

United States > New York

Dear Sir/Madame, I am a representative of the Russian investing company, which is looking for investment opportunities in the USA (NY region is desirable). We are willing to invest from USD 20 to 200 million. We have some requirements for the prospective invest-project: 1) We will buy a controlling stake (up to 85%). At least 15% of the project must be owned by the proprietor (possessor) of the project. 2) Line of business - any. However, construction projects would be the preference. 3) There should exist a detailed business plan, which will be assessed by our experts. 4) Cost recovery (return) period is about 6 years. Should you have any questions feel free to contact me via e-mail. Kind regards, Alexey

$10,000,000 to $200,000,000