New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New Jersey

- Seeking as a partner/investor/employee/active role in day to day company operation. Semi-retired investor. - Innovative and persistent problem solver, who thrives on challenges, and gets the job done. - Strong, empower leader and motivator, well organized and thorough planner, risk management, dealing effectively across all levels of the organization. - Insightful , profit-driven and hands-on Product/Program and Market Management leader with a proven history of success in bringing technology product, network services and solutions to world-wide market – life cycle execution. - Expertise in developing business plans, price and licensing plans, market strategies with marketing and promotional tools for products and services; team builder and led teams for engineering and development, marketing organization. - Expertise in Computer Systems Application, Wireless Networks, Mobile Application, Managed Network Services, Network and System Integration and Deployment.

$10,000 to $100,000

South Africa > Johannesburg

Looking to Invest in new opportunities. I am an entrepeneur and have been operating an Independant Insurance Brokerage for the past 20 years. I am debt free and am looking at Investment opportunities for the next 10 years.

$100,000 to $250,000

United States > Texas

Personal - I am married, with 3 kids living in El Paso Tx Professional - I have over 25 years of experience in running companies and startup up situations. I was a Senior VP running 4 divisions for a Fortune 150 company. My divisions had sales of over $2B and 30K employees. Education - I have a Bachelors in Business Finance and Accounting Investment Experience - I have started two companies growing both from nothing to profitable businesses. The last venture was in the music business. I took on managing very famous latin singer's. The business went from the red into the black in just 1 years. Other - Every position or company I have worked with has improved financial because of my involvement. I am hands on and will only invest if I believe I can add more value than just financial resources

$100,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New Jersey

I have been an entrepreneur for 10 years, recently purchased a company in the food industry and developping it in Canada and USA.

$50,000 to $200,000

United States > Virginia

Our firm has private lenders(for loans only) who can fund Commercial Projects for USA deals ONLY. Assisted Living, Golf Courses, Hotel/Motel, Alternative Energy, Oil and Gas, DIP, Raw Land Lots, Commercial Land Development, 100% Joint Venture, Hard Money(30 to 45 days closing), Income Producing Property, Mixed Use Buildings, Mining, Rehabs, Flips, Refinances, Distressed Properties, and much more! Contact Annette at 804 654 9843 or via email giannette@aol.com. Look forward to doing business with you!!!

$250,000 to $5,000,000,000

Venezuela > CARACAS

- 40 years old, male, married based in Caracas / Venezuela. - Franchise consultant with more than 15 years in managerial experience in marketing and sales departments in mass consumption companies such as Seagram´s, The Quaker Oats Company, PepsiCo. - Master in Marketing and General Management at MGSM (Macquarie Graduate School of Management - Sydney / Australia.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

I have worked with many Entrepreneurs that have developed successful companies. I have a personal Network of investors with in the New York City area that are very interested in investing in new ideas. Our investors are serious, knowledgeable, and are looking for Entrepreneurs who share these same values. If you think you are one of these people, please contact us. Thanks.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Texas

Will provide loans from 2,000 to 10 mil with 3% over 30 years

$2,000 to $10,000,000