New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Connecticut

I am a life long entrepreneur with a dedication to helping business. I have owned two other operations, the second of which grossed 8 million dollars a year. I have a seasoned approach to business and along with my contacts seek to enhance operations as well. I/we have funding for business that have capital themselves to add to their ventures. My professional background includes marketing, retail, real estate and new media and as well i have some background in hospitality, publishing, and sales. I am associated with a group of investors , however the funding is non contingent on 100% agreement for any project/

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Florida

Looking to invest in great ideas. I am an individual investor that can be hands on or relay on your expertise.

$20,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

I am an accountant, a lawyer and an officer at a mid-size media company that has grown significantly over the past five years as a result of financing, strategic partnerships and the restructuring of obligations. I have partnered with a few key people with a broad range of expertise to invest in small, profitable companies with the potential for serious growth. It is our goal to invest in companies and to use our expertise and relationships to add value.

$0 to $2,000,000

United States > Virginia

I am directly linked to a funding group with resources to fund projects and expansion from 2M to 500M+ . Please let me know how I can help you. There are many different projects that will be considered so the only limit is the investor's creativity.

$3,000,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Texas

Private investor Past investments : Real Estate : Travel Industry

$25,000 to $200,000

United States > California

Private Investor

$0 to $15,000,000

United States > Virginia

Objectives would be to invest in start-up or mature businesses. I have no history other than stock investing. I've been a Naval officer for 14 years and I'm a private investor.

$5,000 to $35,000

United States > New York

I have background in finance Operation and was a business owner.

$10,000 to $200,000