New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Washington

Just starting out as an investor, did a couple startups before absolving to work in IT for software company headquartered in Redmond, Seattle.

$10,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

I am looking for new projects mainly in real estates, very interested in Puerto Rico and Santa Domingo.

$15,000,000 to $30,000,000

United States > Connecticut

My investments have been in the traditional outlets of privately held companies and real estate. Have been in advertising for 27 years as a senior manager in large companies and a start-up. My partner and I are new angel investors who would like to participate in the development of a new or established business.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > New York

I'm a no nonsense type guy. What you see is what you get. I believe in competition, as it lets everyone be their best and either sink or swim. I live in New York and am looking to invest in a business. If you have something worth my time, don't hesitate to send me a message and we can set up a meeting.

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I represent a group of individual and corporate investors, looking to maximize their return on real estate-related projects, nationwide. I have been in this business for 18 years, the last 8 owning my own firm. I will provide you with a quick and honest answer.

$100,000 to $10,000,000

Austria > Dornbirn

I'm a finance consultant for an investor group from all over the world. The group of people with whom I work have one of the largest database of investors with more than 10 years of experience and hundreds of finished projects .

$50,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Minnesota

Looking for good projects to fund. Must show solid return and feasibility. Does not have to be real estate. Private US funds, not platform lending. Financing to almost any project, including 'green projects', large contractors, new hotels, mines, golf course and any realistic project. Please have an executive summary and business plan, with proformas. Include a one page Use of Funds, Draw Schedule, when first revenue occurs, when in profit and proposed return to funding source. Municipal/Govt borrowers welcome. Private parties, please structure an equity partner to bring cash and strong credit to the transaction.

$10,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > New York

Owned and operated numerous successful restaurants in NYC.Looking for entrepreneurs who seek additional finance or transfer of ownership. Bi- costal and open to national/international opportunities.

$1,000,000 to $2,000,000