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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Arkansas

We are a primarily a commercial development company seeking to invest in businesses in the aviation industry or aviation-related industry.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

I'm a 53 year old retired software company director with a BS in Electrical Engineering. I currently own a small software company and I'm looking to be a hands-on investor in other startups both tech and non-tech.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > Washington

Yocam Holdings LLC is a privately held for-profit investment firm with headquarters in Bellevue, WA. Founded in September 2006 by five members of the Yocam family, the firm's partnership manages a diverse set of investments within the company's portfolio while actively pursuing various venture capital opportunities. The firm's investment portfolio consists of multiple components across multiple asset classes such as investments in emerging technology, pharmacogenomics, real estate, and entertainment.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > New Jersey

We are a full service financial solutions firm. We have products and services for any financial need someone or company may need. We help raise capital for your company from both public and private offerings and groups. We manage our own fund along with taking companies public. We look forward to speaking with you.

$50,000 to $9,999,999,999

United States > Massachusetts

25 yrs in Information technology experience as a Vice president in fortune 200 largest financial institutions. An investor in few startups related to education, IT and Medical devices. Looking to pick up investments in the range of 25000- 300000 in all business areas mentioned above. Not interested in interest only paying businesses. Can involve at all levels hands-on, advisory, silent etc. Individual Investor.

$1 to $100,000

United States > New York

No project is to big! We are currently funding a 10 billion dollar dea, as well as many other projects. We fund movie deals, real estate dealsl. We are very confident in our abilities to get you funded. Send us your project.

$1,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > Kansas

I am a Chemical Engineer by degree. I have worked as a Process Engineer and recently moved into a Commissioning/Start-up roll Currently employed by an EPC contractor. Would like to help startup businesses by providing the initial capital.

$0 to $20,000

United Kingdom > London

We are an agent for overseas investors who are looking for projects in which they can be JV partners, with them holding 51-60% of the equity, and introduce the entire funding needed. Please note that my clients will not work alongside any other funders or bankers. Initially, you should email us an executive summary, P&L and cashflow. If they are interested, they will ask for a UK meeting to discuss the project and present their terms of business. If it is decided to proceed subsequently, the Heads of Agreement are signed, and a contribution to the arrangement fee is payable to my clients. This sum is refunded when the funding is drawn down. The timescale from signature to drawdown of funds whilst my clients carry out their due diligence and amendment of your business plan is 20-22 weeks. I look forward to hearing from you if you would like me to present your project to my clients.

$20,000,000 to $1,000,000,000