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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Colorado

Prefer investment range of $20 million to $750 million (US dollars) Debt of equity or combination of debt + equity Prompt and thorough due diligence process Terms and structures arranged with a goal of MUTUAL BENEFIT You and your associates must be honorable and trustworthy, pass background investigations. Best of luck with all your business adventures.

$20,000,000 to $600,000,000

United States > New York

Experienced business executive sold successful industrial products business and is now looking for new opportunities. BS Industrial Engineering, MBA Finance (Columbia). 10 years merchant banking experience and 15 years in my business. Capital, energy and expertise available. Prefer established business.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

28 years in VC with 27+% IRR; prior diverse corporate and consulting experience. Have managed / led four VC partnerships; involved in about 30 other private investments. Each partnership has specialized: communications, health care, materials science, and informatics. I do not deviate from such specialization during the life of a partnership. Current partnership interest is health care, with particular interest in devices, informatics, and genomic medicine.

$100,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Tennessee

We have invested in many projects and are seeking more developments. We also have thousands of investors seeking opportunities to invest in.

$1 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

Private Investor with 40 years experience owning and operating service and financial companies. Expertise is in the energy, transportation, construction and financial industries.

$10,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New Jersey

At present I have no investment history, I am currently employed as a systems technician, I will be a private investor.

$300,000 to $500,000

United States > Florida

CEO of a Venture Capital firm and invest in deals myself and have a list of Billionaire investors that trust my advice when I send them the deal- flow that I am working on.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Illinois

Lease fund provides 100% of cost for both to be built and to be renovated existing Special Purpose Entity in exchange for a lease. $10-300M USD Our lease funds and it’s affiliate, has a long history of providing competitively priced long-term commercial real estate financing for single tenant projects. The lease fund was formed by its affiliate as a conduit to provide a Special-Purpose Entity (“SPE”) for Strategic Alliance projects, wherein each SPE leases (1) the land and improvements to the Major Company or (2) to a JV between the Major Company and Project Operator. Under either option, the lessee buys out the SPE for $1.00 at the end of the lease term. The lease funds, with generally the lowest long-term commercial real estate interest rates in the country, are provided by its affiliate’s low-yield bond investors. Industries that qualify for the 100% SPE lease funding are: Manufacturing Facility Distribution Center Hospital Corporate Headquarters Retail Store (single tenant

$25,000,000 to $99,000,000