New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Massachusetts

Scientific background, managerial expertise. 63 years old. Married. Master degree in Biological Sciences. Master degree in Internet Management. My work experience is mostly related to pharmaceutical business. I started working in the research labs of an Italian pharmaceutical company. Then I spent a three years working as quality control and manufacturing manager of a American pharmaceutical american company. After that I move to international business development of a pharmaceutical Swiss company. I created the first plant cloning laboratory in a South American country. I would like to be involved directly in a start up or be a silent partner if requested.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I'm a college graduate and Brooklyn resident with 10+ years in the event production and hospitality sectors. I am an Angel Investor in over 15 companies and am looking for silent partnerships in ventures.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

Dear Sir/Madame, I am a representative of the Russian investing company, which is looking for investment opportunities in the USA (NY region is desirable). We are willing to invest from USD 20 to 200 million. We have some requirements for the prospective invest-project: 1) We will buy a controlling stake (up to 85%). At least 15% of the project must be owned by the proprietor (possessor) of the project. 2) Line of business - any. However, construction projects would be the preference. 3) There should exist a detailed business plan, which will be assessed by our experts. 4) Cost recovery (return) period is about 6 years. Should you have any questions feel free to contact me via e-mail. Kind regards, Alexey

$10,000,000 to $200,000,000

United States > New York

Seeking asset backed opportunities with personal guarantees. Business models should include proven track record of revenue streams with break even or profitable status. No start ups unless substantial assets are pledged that have a liquid market.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

Entrepreneur, Investor, CEO, & Real Estate Developer who loves the simple goodness of life.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Florida

I am a former business owner (two businesses) who has been successful and am looking for an opportunity to invest and build capital.

$10,000 to $65,000

United States > Wisconsin

I have broad manufacturing experience with a few small ventures of my own in the past. I've worked in consumer packaging, tool and die, foundry equipment, metal fabrication for industrial equipment and most recently in Long Term Care making products for nursing homes that were both simple medical devices as described by the FDA and non- medical devices. I've been building business cases for new product development and new product introductions as part of my current role and have traveled to Asia and Mexico for design reviews and production approvals. I'm looking to take my 10 years of product development, international sourcing and marketing experience along with my manufacturing experience to a more flexible, dynamic and agressive environment. I'd like to be part of something that has higher potential than standard returns and willing to take calculated risks to get there.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > Minnesota

Looking for good projects to fund. Must show solid return and feasibility. Does not have to be real estate. Private US funds, not platform lending. Financing to almost any project, including 'green projects', large contractors, new hotels, mines, golf course and any realistic project. Please have an executive summary and business plan, with proformas. Include a one page Use of Funds, Draw Schedule, when first revenue occurs, when in profit and proposed return to funding source. Municipal/Govt borrowers welcome. Private parties, please structure an equity partner to bring cash and strong credit to the transaction.

$10,000,000 to $1,000,000,000