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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > California

I have been in the M&A and Corporate Development side of deals, and am interested in getting involved with a startup from the ground up.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

I work for a fund that invests in small cap and emerging companies to fund media and PR campaigns in return for equity.

$1,000,000 to $25,000,000

United States > California

I represent a Private Investment Fund seeking to deploy up to $20,000,000 in equity or debt financing.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Connecticut

I have started and ran several successful companies in the tech, publ publishing, and service industries. I have also started many companies that failed. So So I have a sense of what doesn't work. I own office space that I can make av available to the right companies. I also own 30,000 square feet warehouse with l logistics capabilities to distribute the right products. You can check our portfolio of the companies I have started. I am looking for an entrepreneur with the right idea/product and the right attitude towards making it work. Beside the financial backing, I can provide the right logistical and advisory framework to move forward. portfolio of the companies I have started. I am looking for an entr entrepreneur with the right idea/product and the right attitude towards making it work. Bes Beside the financial backing, I can provide the right logistical and advisory fr framework to move forward.

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > Illinois

I'm a young business man looking to invest some of my hard earned money, into some profitable business. I'm looking to expand my revenue and business relationships. I have very little investment experience, but I have owned a company of my own for the past year. I own a call center, and we promote heart checks and timeshares

$10,000 to $500,000

United States > New Jersey

Seeking to invest via debt or equity in promising start ups. Can also offer my services as a CPA working in Real Estate taxation should my services be needed.

$1 to $5,000

United States > Missouri

Successful serial entrepreneur with varied background and skills from start up to marketing to exit strategies. Aware of environmental issues and how they coordinate with corporate profit structures. Continually active in working towards reducing governmental interference with viable businesses. Interested in investments that lean towards benefiting society as well as making substantial profits.

$50,000 to $250,000

United States > New Jersey

Hi, I'm 29 years old, and I recently left a successful trading company where I was involved in the technology of high-frequency trading systems. Past deals have included investments in real estate and oil-producing wells. My primary investment goals are diversification and superior returns, be that either structured as steady cashflow or equity growth. I am not a company. It's just me, and investing is my only job. I want to be involved anywhere from not at all to advisory.

$20,000 to $250,000