New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New Jersey

I am the President of a Capital Pool Company listed on the Toronto Venture Exchange.

$500,000 to $750,000

United States > New York

Looking for online website investments and technological investments of all sorts. Heading toward the future.

$100 to $2,000

United States > New York

- recipient of 1999 "Ernst & Young Entrepreneurship Award" - successfully sold telecom company to 2nd largest mobile phone operator in 2001 - purchased & retains exclusive development rights for johnny rockets in NY metro area - active guest speaker for Fordham, NYU, Columbia entrepreneurship programs - actively incubating concepts including iphone development team and first large scale eco-friendly casino resort in EU

$100,000 to $5,000,000

United States > New York

Self-driven leader with an exceptional track record over 19 years for surpassing ambitious goals in Fortune 500 companies and the United Nations; throughout the Americas, Europe and Australia. Industries cover a wide range, from industrial products to automotive components, high-high-end logistics, and both government and private sector fundraising for the UNICEF. Enjoy turning challenging situations around through strategic planning, drive for cost-effective results, total quality management, team-building, and excellent diplomacy, negotiation and sustainable partnering with multiple stakeholders. Innovator in harnessing IT to acquire and disseminate information for real-time customer relationship management. Masters in Business and Public Administration from Georgetown and Harvard universities. Extensive professional network in the US and throughout the world. Family man. Currently live in Manhattan.

$500,000 to $2,000,000

United States > New York

I am a private investor interested in the restaurant industry.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > Kentucky

Private investor

$50,000 to $100,000

Malta > St Pauls Bay

Over the past five or so years I have invested in and helped a number of IT software companies grow their business. These companies are globally spread (EU, US, Canada and Asia) and are typically NOT START UPS (even though I have worked with and helped start ups). They are companies in growth mode that are looking to IPO in the next few years but require additional capital /best practice marketing and selling to grow to their true potential. Hands on with an MBA majoring in marketing and accounting, I am well rounded and experienced at helping good software companies become GREAT software companies. As well as investing in these companies directly, I have and do also helped prepare and raise considerable funds (+$5M) FOR PRE IPO stage.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

United States > New York

I'm in the trucking business. Looking for the right business and person to mentor and invest in.

$0 to $200,000