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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Maryland

I am a private entrepreneur in Washington Dc, I have been involved in businesses for over 2 years. I am currently into retail but looking forward into transportation industry especially overseas. I have a background in business administration. I am an hard working individual with passion to get things done.

$100,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

Thanks for reading this, and good luck in your search process. I currently work in private equity (lower middle market so I could be exposed to hundreds of smaller, everyday companies) and was a former McKinsey consultant. Prior to that, I studied economics at UChicago and was my own entrepreneur (although a business model reselling coffee beans was not a huge success admittedly!) I have extensive investing and operational experiences from analysis, strategic structuring, to just hands-down knocking on doors. Within my job I also handle legal, accounting, and debt-related contracts and topics. Passionate about partnering with strong entrepreneurs in many capacities: from advisory to full partner status, depending on what you need. Can additionally invest as part of a consortium if that is valuable for you. Looking forward to hearing more about your venture!

$100 to $50,000

United States > New York

Private investor interested in making significant equity investments in companies with a distinct competitive advantage. Individual investments of up to USD 20 million. Ability to raise large sums for the right investments.

$100,000 to $20,000,000

United States > Pennsylvania

hard working entrepreneur involved in real estate and logistics looking for new opportunities

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

I am looking for new projects mainly in real estates, very interested in Puerto Rico and Santa Domingo.

$15,000,000 to $30,000,000

United States > Nevada

32 Female Las Vegas Individual Investor Looking to make a investment in a solid and organized company. Currently own two business and have a B.S. in psychology.

$10,000 to $20,000

United States > Florida

While I have invested in traditional enterprises, real estate, food industry, education, I am currently heavily invested in unique and innovative technologies and related solutions for the Direct Marketing and Internet Advertising Industries. As such, I have a company that is bringing a new form of web based tools to this space based on the enhancement of understanding communications preferences of customers. This started out as an educational application. I am looking to invest in companies that have complimentary value to the advertising and marketing industry. I am also keeping my ears attuned to the education and online learning space, as that has always been of great interest to me. My occupational background is in the area of private career education which was the launching pad for these new ideas. After successfully using these training applications with GE Medical Systems I decided to become an entrepreneur, and started investing.

$25,000 to $500,000

United States > South Carolina

I am a Private Consultant that is a direct correspondent to a certified, registered and quality international legitimate lender. I handle pre-screening and facilitating of required documents that I submit to my lender on behalf of the Client Borrower. I am very astute at getting quality projects funded as long as the Client Borrower follows my instruction and the protocol of my lender. I work hard to get quality projects funded.

$500,000 to $500,000,000