New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > South Carolina

I am a Real Estate Broker. I have been in the real estate business for the past 10 years. I have made a few real estate investments in the past few years. I am a private investor looking to learn more about investments and how they work as well as make some money on my investments. Thanks Joan

$10,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

Our Merchant Funding has provided funding and working capital to hundreds of businesses across the United States. We have established a new program for restaurants about to open so that they have enough working capital to operate past opening.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United Kingdom > London

We are an agent for overseas investors who are looking for projects in which they can be JV partners, with them holding 51-60% of the equity, and introduce the entire funding needed. Please note that my clients will not work alongside any other funders or bankers. Initially, you should email us an executive summary, P&L and cashflow. If they are interested, they will ask for a UK meeting to discuss the project and present their terms of business. If it is decided to proceed subsequently, the Heads of Agreement are signed, and a contribution to the arrangement fee is payable to my clients. This sum is refunded when the funding is drawn down. The timescale from signature to drawdown of funds whilst my clients carry out their due diligence and amendment of your business plan is 20-22 weeks. I look forward to hearing from you if you would like me to present your project to my clients.

$20,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > Connecticut

I am a life long entrepreneur with a dedication to helping business. I have owned two other operations, the second of which grossed 8 million dollars a year. I have a seasoned approach to business and along with my contacts seek to enhance operations as well. I/we have funding for business that have capital themselves to add to their ventures. My professional background includes marketing, retail, real estate and new media and as well i have some background in hospitality, publishing, and sales. I am associated with a group of investors , however the funding is non contingent on 100% agreement for any project/

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Connecticut

I'm a 35 year equity investor. I have an JD/MBA from NYU and am looking for a return on my money with anything that I invest. Looking for the company to be successful as I've done before.

$0 to $10,000

United States > Connecticut

Private investor in family owned or closely-held businesses. We emphasize preferred and common stock investments, on a minority or majority basis, in businesses desiring growth capital or seeking to recapitalize their business. We focus on companies with solid growth potential that are cash flow positive. Previously an officer in the loan workout group of a major money center bank and a corporate loan officer in the bank’s energy division. Have invested in approximatley 12 transactions ranging in enterprise value from $7 million to $465 million.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Idaho

retired average guy with a succefull outcome

$10,000 to $500,000

United States > New Jersey

I am the President of a Capital Pool Company listed on the Toronto Venture Exchange.

$500,000 to $750,000