New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

Hungary > Budapest

stated as investment banker, became private equity investor and finally angel investor mainly active in media-technology industries with European background, moving to the US

$1,000 to $50,000

United States > New Jersey

Seeking to invest via debt or equity in promising start ups. Can also offer my services as a CPA working in Real Estate taxation should my services be needed.

$1 to $5,000

United States > Ohio

Single. In my 30s. relocating to NYC by June 2023. Prospective law school applicant. Undergraduate in legal studies and marketing. Interested in corporate law. Diligent hard worker. Excellent analytical skills. Inherited wealth.

$100,000 to $250,000

United States > Pennsylvania

I have never invested this way and am thinking about investing at this time. I am the executive Director of a non-profit organization.

$7,500,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

- 36 year-old single woman with Asian background who has lived in 3 continents over the last 15 years (Asia, Australasia, Americas) - Corporate Executive in a large American Multinational Company with more than 60B annual revenue - Masters degree in commerce & BA in Economics - Invest in real estate and stocks currently - 10 years experience working, living and investing in China - Silent investor with advisory and hands-on optional if I can offer value - Individual investor

$50,000 to $150,000

United States > New York

Commercial funding from $100M to $1B Up to 100% LTC on new construction, 90% LTV on Refi’s and 80% on Cash out. Focused Projects: Hotels, Resorts, Condo Projects, Assisted Living, Office Buildings, Retail, Medical, Multi Family, Industrial, Refineries, Power Plants, Casinos, Sports Stadiums These are ‘Full Doc’ programs so please be prepared to provide all documents required (varies per the scenario). This is NOT Hard Money and rates vary from the 4’s to the 6’s depending on the project. Points, closing costs, interest carry etc. can be rolled into the loan (case by case). Seller carrybacks may also be allowed. Have a stalled project that the lender pulled out of? Send it! Prefer US and Canada projects but will look at international and higher loan amounts also on a case by case basis. I will send you an intake to get you started. TY!

$100,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > New York

I am a corporate attorney in the mergers and acquisitions field. I am seeking a promising investment in which I can have a limited role as director or advisor. I look forward to working with an ambitious team with a definite chief goal.

$15,000 to $30,000

United States > Washington

Just starting out as an investor, did a couple startups before absolving to work in IT for software company headquartered in Redmond, Seattle.

$10,000 to $50,000