New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Maryland

Have invested: Real estate bridge loans New technology products Currently: Small business owner

$5,000,000 to $20,000,000

United States > Florida

I have been investing in real estate for appox 10 years. If the project makes sense and if the project is legal count us in.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > New York

Secured Lending Hedge Fund that looks for the following in transactions: Preservation of capital and downside protection is the overriding theme - Collateral’s value is not correlated to successful and timely repayment of the loan. - Collateral’s value is not based on the successful execution of a business plan. - We look at non-conventional assets such as mining and energy assets, receivables, purchase orders, securities and more. - Deal size between $5-40mm. - Maximum note duration 36 months - We look for yield on the note of mid-high teens’, sometimes we ask for an additional equity kicker - We fund domestic transactions within 4-5 weeks - Our funds are in house so no need to raise the money from outsiders - We typically keep the loans until repayment so the borrower will be dealing with the same managers throughout the entire process - We typically fund entire deals and prefer not to syndicate - We do not want to be involved in the day to day operations of the business

$1,000,000 to $30,000,000

United States > Alabama

Investing in residential real estate single families and multi-family units Real estate investor / loan officer

$3,500,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

As an owner of a commercial finance company, I have access to a large pool of capital that businesses can leverage without giving up equity in their business. Not to mention, traditional bank underwriters don't always understand or respect future growth as they always look at historical data to make their decisions. I am uniquely positioned to help entrepreneurs with their funding needs by utilizing resources at my disposal.

$5,000 to $500,000,000

United States > New York

Attorney established in NYC business seeking to invest in interesting projects with the potential for growth. Willing to be hands on if required or desired.

$25,000 to $150,000

United States > New York

I have a background as an entrepreneur and I have a firm knowledge of what investment seekers are looking for. Currently, I represent an investment/financing group that is seeking construction projects of at least $5 million to $100 million and more. Two or more projects under the auspices of the same individual or company totaling at least the higher dollar amount will be considered. Other areas of interest are construction and renewable energy. Domestic and foreign projects are equally considered. We also provide assistance for the purchase of bank notes.

$300,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New Jersey

This is my first shot at "angel" investing. I have plenty of experience investing in equity markets, and some in real estate. My "day job" is as a software engineer.

$1,000 to $40,000