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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Arkansas

We are a primarily a commercial development company seeking to invest in businesses in the aviation industry or aviation-related industry.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

Australia > Sydney

I am a business man from Australia which involve in many business which I establish and then sale with the profit, and now I am looking for bigger opportunity if possible to invest in.

$1 to $1,000,000

United States > Alabama

I am a partner with my brother in a Sawmill MFG company with about 50 employees. We build portable band saw machines and it's support equipment for sawing lumber from logs in the woods. We currently build 4 sizes of sawmill machines. The support equipment include edgers, saw blade sharpeners and setters. We have a CNC machine shop and produce all the basic parts that we use. These machines are mostly used in small family type operations. Additionally we a one of the largest distributors of thin kerf wood band saws in the US. Our web site is www.cookssaw.com We have a mailing list of over 90,000 that we send catalogs every 2 months. We are interested in being an investing partner in fabricating industry as well as in the lumber making industry that we are presently in.

$25,000 to $250,000

United States > New York

Looking for talented entrepreneurs with energy and focus to build a new business. Business does not have to be sexy but feasible. Looking for simple concepts that need good execution.

$10,000 to $500,000

United States > Connecticut

I graduated from Bryant University with a Bachelors degree in Communications and Marketing. I am seeking an investment opportunity in the New York City restaurant industry. My goal is to own and operate my own restaurant, but for now, I'd like to enter the space as an individual investor. I will be living in Brooklyn, NY, but am open to other areas in the city. I look forward to connecting.

$100,000 to $150,000

United States > Florida

Owned a MFG Plant. Owned an Invoice Factoring Company. Owns an M&A Firm. Currently EVP of an Invoice Factoring & PO Funding company. Sits on the board of the Angel Forum in Florida Past President TMA Florida and board Member ACG.

$25,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Texas

over 14 years experience, Several board and executive management roles for debt & equity financing by way of mezzanine, senior & subordinated debt, preferred securities and equity co-investments to assist in Acquisition Financing, Growth Financing, Leveraged Buyouts, Recapitalization and Special Dividends. Throughout my tenure I have been involved in the underwriting of in excess of $3 billion for opportunities with upside potential both domestically and abroad.

$1,000,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Oregon

I am 28 years of age and am looking to invest in new, developing and mature enterprises. I am new to investing in businesses so I would at first like a hands off approach, if you feel you need a partner as well as an investor then I would be happy to see how I could best fit your business plan. I look forward to working with you in the future and helping facilitate your goals.

$5,000 to $200,000