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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Texas

Invested with private small businesses in Eastern Europe and public stocks in US. Had an active management role with many of the companies I invested with. Interested in diversified portfolio and generating higher return than what public stocks can offer right now. I like business models that can show potential for steady monthly revenues. I prefer a profit sharing agreement.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

I am a Sr. Business Advisor. We have access to over 75 + lenders and a variety of lending programs for businesses at every stage. Whether it's a start up or an existing business looking to expand we have SBA lending options as well as alternative working capital solutions for every small to mid-size businesses.

$5,000 to $5,000,000

Israel > New York

I'm a CPA in my education with vast knowledge in finance. At the present I'm doing Cash Advance, hard money, with background in the RE fix & flip as well as RE development funding. During the years 2016-2019 I did food import. I'd be happy to hear about rock solid investment with good people that I can engage with as a hands-on partner and develop their business. Best regards, Eran

$1 to $200,000

United States > Utah

Savvy business investor seeking an established business to help grow. We are ready to do some analysis and invest in a worthy business.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

Previous experience involves building, operating, managing and investing in 32 businesses in last 34 years. Would be looking to exercise some of my past business know how in the implementing and leadership of new projects we participate in. I represent a group of savvy businessmen in varied fields. Many of our investments were in product developments.

$1,000,000 to $5,000,000

United States > New York

I worked as a real estate consultant at Morgan Stanley for several years before opening up a retail/restaurant and real estate consulting firm. I have worked with many national real estate investors as well as numerous 2-star NYC restaurants. References are available upon request. I do not charge a retainer fee and you will receive 100% personal service. I have access to more than $500,000,000 in REAL money - no broker chains - direct access.

$500,000 to $200,000,000

United States > Arkansas

We are a primarily a commercial development company seeking to invest in businesses in the aviation industry or aviation-related industry.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > North Carolina

JV Equity Partnership Corporation brings all the funds to your project, as well as Engineering, Advisory and Marketing expertise as needed. We specialize in humanitarian projects nationwide. Our mission is to create new jobs all around the world, through our acquisitions & JV Partnerships. We JV & Acquire mostly projects, with the following discipline: Energy, Transportation, Hospitality, Housing, Aviation, Shipping, Cancer Research, and Shopping Centers. The acquisitions take from 90 -120 days to close and do not require up front fees. Looking to find and help get funded 3-5 suitable projects per month.

$50,000,000 to $1,000,000,000