New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New Jersey

Private investor looking for new prospects to make good returns. Investment history in real estate professionally employed in the Insurance Industry.

$1,000 to $10,000

United States > Alabama

Investing in residential real estate single families and multi-family units Real estate investor / loan officer

$3,500,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

We are seeking secure investment opportunities across a wide range of sectors in either mature or new industries. We have no geographical limit. We are basically interested in start-up businesses

$500,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

I am 33 years old, single person with my own business , new in NYC looking for new opportunities and ideas to find new partners

$15,000 to $20,000

United States > Washington

Providing Joint Venture Funding for qualified projects. Min. funding amount $5,000,000 to $500,000,000 Larger funding amounts possible upon review. No DEBT SERVICE Many years working in the commercial & investment banking industry. Private Investment Group.

$5,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > California

We are a business consulting and private equity investment company seeking to partner with companies who desire to expand in the emerging global economy in the areas of; technology, renewable energy, films, humanitarian efforts, rebuilding impoverished communities, facilitating medical care and supplies. I became a successful Venture Capital Investment Broker selling private common stock to accredited investors nationwide in West Los Angeles, Ca. I raised over 100 million dollars in investment capital funding contributing to the success of several national and international corps including: Vanna White’s Toothpaste infomercials ($5.0M raised), Joy Mangano’s The Miracle Mop Infomercial (aired HSN $4.5M raised), La Toya Jackson Dateline 900 Infomercial ($4.0M raised), emusic.com ($2M raised, first company offering music download) Exxon/Mobile Oil and gas drilling (10M)

$5,000,000 to $20,000,000

United States > New Jersey

We are a group of investors, interested in projects to stimulate the economy. We are directly in contact with the Private Placement Bank. Because they are Private, loans are not necessary, as no form of repayment is required. We assure you will achieve all of your funding objectives from 5M to 2B+ and not have to pay it back, guaranteed. Assets, and or Liquidity are required. You will use it to leverage funding for yourself, the bank will do the rest. again, for this program YOU MUST HAVE ASSETS OR LIQUIDITY. These are non traditional forms of banking, credit checks are not necessary. solid business plans are as the the money must go to the project in many cases. simply because you don't have to pay it back, you must at least bring assets.

$5,000,000 to $2,000,000,000

United States > Massachusetts

Scientific background, managerial expertise. 63 years old. Married. Master degree in Biological Sciences. Master degree in Internet Management. My work experience is mostly related to pharmaceutical business. I started working in the research labs of an Italian pharmaceutical company. Then I spent a three years working as quality control and manufacturing manager of a American pharmaceutical american company. After that I move to international business development of a pharmaceutical Swiss company. I created the first plant cloning laboratory in a South American country. I would like to be involved directly in a start up or be a silent partner if requested.

$10,000 to $100,000