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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Florida

Married 37 years. 2 daughters, 2 grand kids. College degree: two years BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION, Mexico. Business experience: Owner, Vice president: Plastic container manufacturing company, Mexico, city. Move to EUA August 1984. Owner, President: Imports company. Toys, Gifts from Far East into EUA, Wholesale, Retail, Distribution. Owner, President: Three stores retail operation. Luggage and travel accessories. Miami, Fl. Family investment in: Automobile Dealerships. Mexico city. Owner, president: Small distribution sunglasses and reading glasses. Passion for family. Passion for automobiles in every form. Specially Formula One racing. Trying to come back from semi-retirement

$5,000,000 to $20,000,000

United States > Colorado

As the owner of three different corporations started from scratch, I enjoy the excitement and rush of the transition of a creative idea into reality. I am a private investor interested in new ideas that have the strength to become a reality. Having a dual degree in finance and real estate helped me build my companies which started our as an idea and have over the past 15 years continued to blossom. My experience includes: an FDIC / Supervisoy Liquidation Specialist managing and disposing of $2B in assets for the government - to being a Court Receiver managing Real Property in Dispute. My current businesses are in Manufacturing, Specialized Freight Transpotation and the Casino Gaming Industry,

$100,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

We are a national real estate investment firm that provides equity and mezzanine financing to real estate developers (we are principal Investors, not brokers). Our focus is on middle market for sale and rental housing, low income tax credit housing, and community revitalizing commercial projects. With the closing of our latest Fund, we plan to invest $300 million over the next few years in development projects in New York, New Jersey and Connecticut.

$3,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New York

Looking to invest

$1 to $1,000,000

United States > California

Hi, I am a consultant with a group funding sources to assist you in your funding needs. We have funded projects like yours in the past and they may be interested in funding this project. Our consulting services include: NO UPFRONT FEES! Please submit a business plan and executive summary of your project to start. Other lender documentation which may be required: A. Use of Funds B. Proforma C. Biography D. Resume E. Exit strategy F. Do you have 15/20% invested in the project. In order to facilitate a faster response time, please tell us if you have shopped this project and if there is a fee agreement in place. I look forward to assisting you with creative funding sources to make your project reality!

$1,000,000 to $1,000,000,000

United States > Georgia

Min loan amount - 10k No max Real Estate investment properties only Non- Owner Occupied properties Purchases or REFI's Residential or Commercial 80% LTV - Residential 65% LTV - commercial We invest in ALL 50 states

$500,000 to $10,000,000

United States > Texas

We are always looking for new deals.

$1,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Washington D.C.

I would like to invest in companies that have a strong track record I am commercial loan broker I have worked in this field for the last 4 years I am a member of PFA professional finance accolades. We work all over the world, I have a loan that I am working on from Russia at this very moment. We have a very large pool of investors at my disposal that I work with constantly. Also I can any companies that are in bankruptcy or in merger or need working capital

$500,000 to $10,000,000