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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New Jersey

I'm an intellectual property attorney with over 20+ years of experience in procuring and analyzing patents. I have BS and MS in electrical/computer engineering and, prior to law school, worked as an engineer for 3 years. I'm looking for equity ownership in return for my cash investment and expertise in preparing and filing patent applications. I'm only interested in investing in ideas that can be protected by a patent, as well as other forms of intellectual property.

$500,000 to $10,000,000

United States > California

I personally have 28 years of experience in commercial finance. Currently my flagship product is a funding strategy created by the SEC in 1982; the Reg D Private Placement. This strategy has been extremely successful over the years. It is estimated that over $40 million a day is raised for entrepreneurs using this structure. Many who seek funding make the mistake of believing a business plan is all that is needed. Wrong! Sophisticated investors expect that companies seeking financing are savvy enough to have a complete prospectus that respects state and federal securities laws, as well as a well-thought-out business plan. I will be happy to review your proposal free of obligation or cost.

$100,000 to $15,000,000

United States > New York

I am seeking opportunities to invest in small businesses, real estate, and/or restaurants in NYC. Depending on the investment, I will also gladly serve in an advisory capacity, as well as research and development. My hands-on involvement will largely depend on the type of investment, but I would require regular and frequent status reports/updates.

$500 to $5,000

United States > New York

Knowledgeable, advisory in REAL ESTATE, EQUITY, FUNDING, PRIVATE FUNDING

$1,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New Jersey

We offer a variety of creative lending programs based on your situation. Bankruptcy and foreclosure is ok. We like to qualify your business for one or a combination of several funding programs. To do this we need you to send us an executive summary / business plan / or funding proposal. We also need a copy of a credit report issued in the last 30 days. If applicable include any information on the real estate involved including pictures. Funding ranges from 100 k to 50 mm.

$100,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New York

Ricardo Lopez, 43 years old living in New York city almost for a decade. I'm an Executive Director and ex-consultant with 18 years of IT experience looking to expand my horizons. I'm also very familiar with the entertainment industry as perform as a hobby. Currently Treasurer and Board member as well of a dance company. Certified Project Manager, who has worked in 5 continents. MBA. Last year I got my experience as an Angel Investor for a french restaurant overseas and so far, I enjoyed very much the experience. Looking for more. My previous participation as Angel investor is more as an advisory and silent. I'm very interesting on IT investments, Arts and entertainment and social, as I have a passion for a good cup of coffee where tablets, smartphones and social media are combined into a group of friends.

$5,000 to $20,000

United States > North Carolina

I am a Chemical Engineer that has been on the business side of our various companies for 30 years. We have bought and sold three businesses, two of which were chemical manufacturing faclities with values of 8 figures. We are looking for someone that can bring new products to our operation and we would offer an equity position for any new products added as they become profitable. We have the facility and financing and need additional ideas. We are located on the coast of NC.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > Washington

I have a varied educational background (BS and MS Computer Science and MBA) so I can help navigate between technology and business. I also have experience working as a software developer and as a product manager for a large online retailer. Admittedly, I am just starting out as an investor, but with my background I bring real insight to the table. My involvement would depend on the pedigree of the entrepreneur and their preference. However, at this stage in my investing career I feel I can best aid an entrepreneur in an advisory capacity. I am married with no children. We live well below our means and have a decent amount of disposable income. We invest in the stock market and would like to invest in real people who have passion, intelligence, and a track record of success. I reside in Washington state but am open to investments anywhere in the continental United States.

$1,000 to $30,000