New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Nevada

20 year+ private investor with a M.B.A/J.D.

$500,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

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$0 to $0

United States > Missouri

I am an individual investor. I focus on Seed Capital, Early-Stage, Start-up, Ventures, LLC and All rounds for completion and expansion of investment projects that need immediate funding

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Florida

While I have invested in traditional enterprises, real estate, food industry, education, I am currently heavily invested in unique and innovative technologies and related solutions for the Direct Marketing and Internet Advertising Industries. As such, I have a company that is bringing a new form of web based tools to this space based on the enhancement of understanding communications preferences of customers. This started out as an educational application. I am looking to invest in companies that have complimentary value to the advertising and marketing industry. I am also keeping my ears attuned to the education and online learning space, as that has always been of great interest to me. My occupational background is in the area of private career education which was the launching pad for these new ideas. After successfully using these training applications with GE Medical Systems I decided to become an entrepreneur, and started investing.

$25,000 to $500,000

United States > Alabama

FOUNDED COMPOSITE MANUFACTURING FIRM (INDUSTRIAL) 35 YEARS SUCCESSFUL OPERATION, IMPORTED EXPORTED, BUT BUT BUT PRIMARILY SOLD PRODUCT WITHIN THE U.S.. SEEKING SOUND BUSINESS INVESTMENT.

$25,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

28 years in VC with 27+% IRR; prior diverse corporate and consulting experience. Have managed / led four VC partnerships; involved in about 30 other private investments. Each partnership has specialized: communications, health care, materials science, and informatics. I do not deviate from such specialization during the life of a partnership. Current partnership interest is health care, with particular interest in devices, informatics, and genomic medicine.

$100,000 to $2,000,000

United States > New Jersey

I am a private investor who, at times, was/is able to pool other investors on a given venture. I have 25 years experience in the investment banking industry, during the course of which, I had engaged in privately funding several opportunities. Though my investment objective has been to seek a rule-of-thumb return based on "seven-in-seven", I can be flexible given the nature of the opportunity/circumstance.

$20,000 to $400,000

United States > Pennsylvania

I am a founding partner of a Socially Responsible Venture Fund based in Lancaster, PA. The objective of the Fund is to invest in exciting, early- stage (NOT Start-ups), high growth humanitarian, sustainable, environmental or socially responsible businesses with a focus on those that are primed for rapid expansion if they had the funding. The purpose of the Fund is to earn superior financial returns for our investors by capitalizing on leveraged private equity investing in rapid- growth companies and then managing the process to take those companies public either by a ‘reverse-merger’ on the U.S. stock market, a listing on the London Stock Exchange or other method so that our investment is liquid.

$100,000 to $1,000,000