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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I am a individual investor. I live with my wife and my daughter in the New York city area. I am willing to invest in concept ideas and want to involve hands-on or in the advisory board. Thanks and looking forward to working with you.

$1,000 to $5,000

United States > New York

I am a Private investor, as well as affiliated with a Group of investors, seeking to invest

$0 to $9,000,000,000

United States > Connecticut

I am a 31 year old Investor with an interest in Investing in the areas/fields that I strongly believe in. I am currently employed in health care sector with an MBA degree. I am highly motivated with excellent communication and inter-personal skills with a strong desire to be successful.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

Looking for investment opportunities in tri-state area. Will look at each investment opportunity independently in order to best assert the investment amount, percentage control, and other factors.

$1 to $15,000

United States > California

Former investment banker. Real estate developer/investor. Investments include seed stage green products, restaurant, retail operation and real estate partnerships.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New Jersey

We provide business funding to help start up or expand your business. If you do not have an existing business, we can also help will set one up. Whether you need $1,000 or more than $100,000, we can help you get the funding you require. As a matter of fact, the interest you pay won't be for the amount you are qualified for, but the amount you choose to spend; So for example, we provide you with $100,000, and you only choose to use $25,000, the interest you pay will be the percentage on the used amount; This alone will help you save even more, over the course of your loan. If interested, please do give us a call. We are interested in assisting you in any form possible. Thanks again, and good luck on your business!

$1,000 to $500,000

United States > Florida

Married 37 years. 2 daughters, 2 grand kids. College degree: two years BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION, Mexico. Business experience: Owner, Vice president: Plastic container manufacturing company, Mexico, city. Move to EUA August 1984. Owner, President: Imports company. Toys, Gifts from Far East into EUA, Wholesale, Retail, Distribution. Owner, President: Three stores retail operation. Luggage and travel accessories. Miami, Fl. Family investment in: Automobile Dealerships. Mexico city. Owner, president: Small distribution sunglasses and reading glasses. Passion for family. Passion for automobiles in every form. Specially Formula One racing. Trying to come back from semi-retirement

$5,000,000 to $20,000,000

United States > Florida

I am an individual that has some funds to invest in viable opportunities. Contact for more information

$50,000 to $1,000,000