New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I'm 44 yrs of age. I am in the apparel manufacturing industry for quite some time. Looking for a unique business venture to invest in.

$5,000 to $150,000

United States > New Jersey

Live in northern jersey 15 min from New York City, single, and no kids. I am a mature 31 years old all business and no nonsense kind of guy. Will listen to proposals and will invest if think it is a good idea. Need to be in the loop somehow even if i am a silent partner. Have a great deal of family in the molding industry and would make it really easy to get a great idea started if that is the type of investment I am involved in. Have lots of connection Brazil if needed. Am really ready to invest with no nonsense if someone is ready to pitch me a good idea.

$50,000 to $160,000

United States > Texas

I am a commercial loan consultant and have ties with investors, but not an accredited investor. I am joining this website basically only to get leads for commercial loans to partner with hard money lenders to fund the deals. I am not a licensed accredited investor as section 501 of Regulation D Of sec. I am not a licensed sec angel investor or a broker.

$0 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

MBA - Finance Undergrad - MIS & Strategic Management Wharton educated Tech & Finance background, entrepreneurial spirit, analytical, and strategic thinker. Require hands-on involvement in potential investment.

$0 to $500,000

United States > New York

We are a family office seeking to invest and partner with other family owned businesses. We seek for cash flowing business with minimum EBITDA of $5M.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New Jersey

I've always been interested in small businesses and entrepreneurs. In the past I worked at Goldman Sachs and realized I hate big companies. I then went to work for a start up internet company for a while before returning to work for the family business. I'm interested in working with exciting companies that are looking to grow and make a difference in the world. I've invested in hedge funds and other investments and it's not very much fun so looking for something that's more interesting and tangible.

$25,000 to $250,000

United States > Arkansas

Investment Criteria While the merits of each investment will vary, we evaluate your venture according to the following criteria. Management Team We look for teams of high-quality entrepreneurs with a track record of leadership and performance, either in the company's specific industry or in prior entrepreneurial ventures. We also look at your team's passion for and commitment to the new business idea, and your ability to inspire confidence among future stakeholders, including employees, potential customers, and investors. As we will be working together as partners, your team's credibility is essential. In addition, your team must be open to and comfortable with receiving input provided by angel investors. Market Opportunity We invest in solutions that address major problems for significantly large target markets. Your company must demonstrate a strategy to claim significant share of this market.

$100,000 to $600,000,000

United States > Pennsylvania

I represent an angel investor who is interested in expanding his investment portfolio. To date, he has funded projects throughout the United States in biotechnology, manufacturing, software development, IT, energy, health and pharmaceuticals, real estate, nd the gaming industry. He requires a solid 3-5 year exit strategy with a healthy return. His contacts in almost every industry are extensive. The process is simple: once you have my email: 1. contact me through email stating your interest and your project; 2. send me a business plan which should include financials, exit strategy and a bio

$100,000 to $5,000,000