New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Pennsylvania

30 years experience in all aspects of finance

$1,000,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

I live and work in New York City, and have begun looking for investments outside of the normal course (stock market, CDs, etc). I work as a corporate attorney at Kirkland & Ellis LLP, a law firm in midtown, and for the past 4.5 years have worked with my clients to navigate numerous complex corporate financing and investments. I would like to pair this experience with my personal savings and like- minded entrepreneurs, and eventually help advise and assist the growth of their businesses. I am a private investor, looking to invest in the beginning stages of businesses.

$25,000 to $75,000

United States > New York

I'm a private investor looking for alternative investments. I've worked in the financial services industry for the last 20 years.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

Knowledgeable, advisory in REAL ESTATE, EQUITY, FUNDING, PRIVATE FUNDING

$1,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New York

I am a lawyer, willing to invest time and expertise, as well as cash, seeking symbiotic relationship with other investors who bring other areas of technical or business expertise, as well as cash, to the venture.

$100,000 to $25,000,000

United States > New Jersey

Small real estate developer specializing in historic renovation projects in New Jersey looking for other opportunities. Have 20 years experience in NYC managing large scale commercial construction projects. Am open to projects where there are experienced principals involved and would like to get involved myself. Have a small amount of cash but also have access to Construction financing.

$50,000 to $200,000

United States > Arkansas

Investment Criteria While the merits of each investment will vary, we evaluate your venture according to the following criteria. Management Team We look for teams of high-quality entrepreneurs with a track record of leadership and performance, either in the company's specific industry or in prior entrepreneurial ventures. We also look at your team's passion for and commitment to the new business idea, and your ability to inspire confidence among future stakeholders, including employees, potential customers, and investors. As we will be working together as partners, your team's credibility is essential. In addition, your team must be open to and comfortable with receiving input provided by angel investors. Market Opportunity We invest in solutions that address major problems for significantly large target markets. Your company must demonstrate a strategy to claim significant share of this market.

$100,000 to $600,000,000

United States > Virginia

Minimum of $150,000 in annual revenue with a FICO score of at least 551 can get you anywhere from $5,000 up to $1 Million USD. Can be used for inventory, working capital, or equipment. We will also buy your invoices on net 30 or 60 day terms from B2B sales or services. This is known as factoring or accounts receivable financing.

$5,000 to $1,000,000