New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > California

A privately owned firm that makes large-scale investments in industries such as real estate, market-leading media, manufacturing & production, consumer-related businesses, technology and biotech. Founded in 2007, the company focuses on investing in innovative entrepreneurs, real estate developers and high-growth companies that address a potential partnership and large market opportunities. We make investments across all stages of a company's growth - from seed capital through late stage growth equity. Please submit your business plan

$100,000 to $5,000,000

United States > New York

College graduate with extensive experience in dental office management, looking to invest in an existing dental office or open a new office.

$25,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

Currently involved in acquiring REO properties for short sales in New York. These acquired homes will be sold @ 20-50% discounted prices. My background is in Media Production as well as Marketing and Public Relations. I am currently a private investor in the process of creating a solid team of investors.

$5,000 to $10,000

Mexico > Hermosillo

I am a real estate investor since 1999 and looking to invest in high potential growing companies, if you're looking for money I have it, but if you're looking for your business advice I can't help you there . if you have a good plan with advisors and experts in your business arena, I have the money.

$30,000 to $500,000

United States > Illinois

I'm a young business man looking to invest some of my hard earned money, into some profitable business. I'm looking to expand my revenue and business relationships. I have very little investment experience, but I have owned a company of my own for the past year. I own a call center, and we promote heart checks and timeshares

$10,000 to $500,000

Canada > Thornhill

Represent a business development firm, willing to help new clients in the media and technology space. Contact me for additional detail.

$500,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

Private investor interested in making significant equity investments in companies with a distinct competitive advantage. Individual investments of up to USD 20 million. Ability to raise large sums for the right investments.

$100,000 to $20,000,000

Israel > New York

I'm a CPA in my education with vast knowledge in finance. At the present I'm doing Cash Advance, hard money, with background in the RE fix & flip as well as RE development funding. During the years 2016-2019 I did food import. I'd be happy to hear about rock solid investment with good people that I can engage with as a hands-on partner and develop their business. Best regards, Eran

$1 to $200,000