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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Skilled professional with 20 years business experience.

$0 to $150,000

United States > New Jersey

We are a group of investors, interested in projects to stimulate the economy. We are directly in contact with the Private Placement Bank. Because they are Private, loans are not necessary, as no form of repayment is required. We assure you will achieve all of your funding objectives from 5M to 2B+ and not have to pay it back, guaranteed. Assets, and or Liquidity are required. You will use it to leverage funding for yourself, the bank will do the rest. again, for this program YOU MUST HAVE ASSETS OR LIQUIDITY. These are non traditional forms of banking, credit checks are not necessary. solid business plans are as the the money must go to the project in many cases. simply because you don't have to pay it back, you must at least bring assets.

$5,000,000 to $2,000,000,000

United States > New Jersey

I am new investor. I only have experience in investing for my retirement. I work in the education field. I am new to angel investing and I take every proposal in to consideration.

$0 to $500,000

United States > Tennessee

I have been managing an investment group since 1994 and my mentor, who is still part of the group, had been in this business for 25 years prior to me. We look for strength of management and then available market share as our primary decision making criteria. My group is made up of business people who are looking for a solid return. We provide this to them and form a separate LLC to invest into ventures; this is an advantage to you because we only use up one investor slot doing it this way. I only deal with accredited investors and my group is made up of approximately 20,000 investors based primarily in the US but some are from Asia, Europe and Canada. I believe in doing business face to face and will require an in person meeting with all the principals. I am an entrepreneur myself and currently own 4 businesses. I will consider almost anything unless you do not have anything invested in the deal.

$100,000 to $30,000,000

United States > Georgia

Serial entrepreneur. Group investor. Former broker, registered principal. Owned a successful international venture consulting business.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Illinois

Lease fund provides 100% of cost for both to be built and to be renovated existing Special Purpose Entity in exchange for a lease. $10-300M USD Our lease funds and it’s affiliate, has a long history of providing competitively priced long-term commercial real estate financing for single tenant projects. The lease fund was formed by its affiliate as a conduit to provide a Special-Purpose Entity (“SPE”) for Strategic Alliance projects, wherein each SPE leases (1) the land and improvements to the Major Company or (2) to a JV between the Major Company and Project Operator. Under either option, the lessee buys out the SPE for $1.00 at the end of the lease term. The lease funds, with generally the lowest long-term commercial real estate interest rates in the country, are provided by its affiliate’s low-yield bond investors. Industries that qualify for the 100% SPE lease funding are: Manufacturing Facility Distribution Center Hospital Corporate Headquarters Retail Store (single tenant

$25,000,000 to $99,000,000

United States > Florida

I am a FINANCIAL CONSULTANT that has direct lenders that are looking to loan for ASSET BASED SITUATIONS. There LTV depends on the situations, must have paper work, no dreamers. I DO NOT REQUIRE ANY RETAINERS.

$5,000,000 to $20,000,000

Georgia > Tbilisi

Seasoned executive with 20+ years of experience in finance industry. While living in Georgia, I'm Looking for opportunities for investment outside the country. I have MBA degree from IE Business School. Looking forward to receive interesting proposals.

$50,000 to $200,000