New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

Singapore > Singapore

I'm a young Digital Marketing Expert looking to invest money in consumer facing projects. I have a degree in Business Management and Marketing and 5 years + of experience in the working environment. I have worked for a start-up and am currently working in a start-up business unit within a large company. I work in branding and communications and have experience in all things digital i.e. search, display, ad-serving etc. I also have contacts in clothing and alcohol distribution and import/export. I'm absolutely willing to get hands on with a business if it is a good opportunity and want to work with ambitious people similar to myself.

$1,000 to $10,000

United States > New York

Stephen is an investment professional and corporate turnaround specialist. He is a Director at an investment firm with holdings both domestically and internationally in real estate, transportation, energy, and luxury services. Additionally, he is an adjunct lecturer at the City University of New York. Previously, he lead the Emerging Markets Investment Banking team at Oppenheimer of North America, where the firm advised on $6 billion in aggregate transactions. In particular, he worked closely with Foreign Direct Investments to accelerate economic growth in the Central Europe, MENA, and Asia regions. Prior to Oppenheimer, Stephen was a Vice President at J.P. Morgan and before that, he was a Vice President at Bear Stearns. Stephen was educated at the NYU School of International Business & Finance and the NYU Schack Institute of Real Estate. He holds a Bachelor of Science from Brown University.

$1 to $20,000,000

United States > Texas

Private individual looking to consider funding any business with good potential for cash flow and long term viability.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

Attorney in the New York Area that has an interest in angel investing and has done so in a number of companies.

$1,000 to $250,000

United States > New York

I have worked with many Entrepreneurs that have developed successful companies. I have a personal Network of investors with in the New York City area that are very interested in investing in new ideas. Our investors are serious, knowledgeable, and are looking for Entrepreneurs who share these same values. If you think you are one of these people, please contact us. Thanks.

$5,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New Jersey

I'm a senior management executive with 20 years direct experience. Married, living in New Jersey. Bachelors and 2 Masters Degrees - Ivy League No investment experience Can be advisory, silent, or somewhat hands-on if the situation required this involvement. Individual investor.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > Indiana

A Bsc (hons) degree. Had started more than a dozen businesses over the past 20 years. Started as a day options trader during the high tech boom of 2000. Then moved into Real Estate investment mostly in Chicago metro and Heath care sectors., which I still do today.

$150,000 to $550,000

United States > New York

- recipient of 1999 "Ernst & Young Entrepreneurship Award" - successfully sold telecom company to 2nd largest mobile phone operator in 2001 - purchased & retains exclusive development rights for johnny rockets in NY metro area - active guest speaker for Fordham, NYU, Columbia entrepreneurship programs - actively incubating concepts including iphone development team and first large scale eco-friendly casino resort in EU

$100,000 to $5,000,000