New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New Jersey

Interested in Investing in business, startups, existing businesses in New York

$10,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

With access to dozens of lenders, investors and programs, AMBS has the ability to provide funds for just about any business. Though we do work in the investor space we prefer traditional loans/financing.

$20,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Virginia

Our firm has private lenders(for loans only) who can fund Commercial Projects for USA deals ONLY. Assisted Living, Golf Courses, Hotel/Motel, Alternative Energy, Oil and Gas, DIP, Raw Land Lots, Commercial Land Development, 100% Joint Venture, Hard Money(30 to 45 days closing), Income Producing Property, Mixed Use Buildings, Mining, Rehabs, Flips, Refinances, Distressed Properties, and much more! Contact Annette at 804 654 9843 or via email giannette@aol.com. Look forward to doing business with you!!!

$250,000 to $5,000,000,000

United States > Colorado

My brother and I have personal investment history but no angel investment history. We are open to all investment ideas whether it be privately or with a group of other investors.

$2,000 to $45,000

United States > North Carolina

I am a Chemical Engineer that has been on the business side of our various companies for 30 years. We have bought and sold three businesses, two of which were chemical manufacturing faclities with values of 8 figures. We are looking for someone that can bring new products to our operation and we would offer an equity position for any new products added as they become profitable. We have the facility and financing and need additional ideas. We are located on the coast of NC.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

I can bring deals to a serious REIT. This REIT has over 5 billion dollars in buying power. The REIT trust wants to be a 50% Equity Partner on New York Real Estate deals, that or 25 Million dollars and up. No limit. They want to spend their first billion in New York. This is great for developers who need financing, seed money, hotels, and major condominium deals. The Investors want to come in with the cash, and wants the deal to run itself. They want to be silent or hands off partners. The REIT can show Proof of Funds, and verify whatever is needed. We look for deals or projects to be presented to the fund. We need a basic description of a potential deal. Then we set up meetings with the REIT. This is serious money backed by US TREASURY BILLS. This is a platform that will use Wall St. I have over 3 years of experience in bringing investors and projects together

$25,000,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Texas

I have invested several hundred thousand dollars in oil and gas exploration, water rights, oil pipelines, and angel startups in a variety of industries.

$20,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

Experience business owner and CEO. VAR for IBM 10 Years, Haute Couture Fashion House 17 years, Defense Contractor 8 Years. Past gross revenue range 1MM to 50MM - will consider any size. Interested in a hands on investment with a company who is in need of leadership and a cash infusion. Areas of expertise: finance, operations and growth. Individual investor. Reside NYC.

$100,000 to $300,000