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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Personal information : I am 35 years old, single and live in NYC. Professional experience: I currently work for the city. I come from a business background specializing in import/wholesale distribution. Education Bachelor Degree Investment experience: I currently own a rental property. I have been involved in a development project in brooklyn that ended successfully in the past. Other value-adds: I have experience in commercial loans for businesses. Anticipated involvement: Silent Status: Individual investor

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > Texas

Own Texas oil and gas company, looking to diversify into other industries

$0 to $4,000,000

United States > Florida

Investment banking and finance experience.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Florida

Owned a MFG Plant. Owned an Invoice Factoring Company. Owns an M&A Firm. Currently EVP of an Invoice Factoring & PO Funding company. Sits on the board of the Angel Forum in Florida Past President TMA Florida and board Member ACG.

$25,000 to $1,000,000

United States > California

We have over 400 alternative funding sources that are interested in putting their money up for the right projects. Funding projects requiring a minimum of $10M. One important factor is how much cash you currently have available to invest in your own project, because investors like to know that you can’t easily walk away from your deal. Please contact me with your Executive Summary

$1,000,000 to $15,000,000

United States > Texas

I am 31-years-old and interested in getting into the investment arena. I have been a gov't intelligence analyst for the past 9 years, but have recently quit my job, so I could move back home to spend some time with my father before he passes away. Needless to say, my life style has changed from what I am used to and am looking for a way to supplement my new lower income.

$20,000 to $40,000

United States > New York

I am a law graduate from Boston University School of Law with extensive international experience across the UK, USA, China, Europe, and the Middle East. With a strong background in value investing, I specialize in identifying and unlocking potential in undervalued and underdeveloped assets. In my previous real estate investment, I capitalized on the post-Brexit uncertainty in the UK, acquiring undervalued properties in an environment of market fear. One notable example involved purchasing an apartment in a poorly managed building, where I, alongside other investors, secured the rights to take over management. This strategic move not only improved operational efficiency but also significantly increased the asset's value. I have a keen eye for identifying opportunities where value can be created through strategic management and operational improvements, making me a dedicated and resourceful investor committed to long-term growth. I am open to exploring new ventures across other assets

$40,000 to $60,000

United States > Massachusetts

-Entrepreneurial knowledge / understanding - Looking for projects with the capacity to growth faster in revenue -Expertise in International Commerce/ Finance -Own and realize 3 successful businesses in the past years

$10,000 to $150,000