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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Florida

I am investing for a private group.

$1 to $100,000

United States > Tennessee

Looking to invest in solid ideas with people driven to do the work necessary to succeed.

$0 to $100,000

United States > New York

We are a rapidly growing holdings company with strong subsidiaries nationwide. The Company has proven M&A expertise and intends to maintain its focus a few core divisions (construction, real estate, merchant services, and various other B2B services); while expanding its operations in these sectors through acquisitions primarily in emerging market

$10,000 to $90,000,000

United States > Michigan

BSc (Computer Science) MBA Extensive experience as an entrepreneur. Have started companies from startup stage, to international franchising and publicly listed a US based franchise on the Frankfurt Exchange. Extensive experience in B2B and service based industries. Well versed with international business, different cultures and how to build businesses across borders. Dual citizen (Australian, United States). I am looking to be a part of a team to help run and build an established business that does not require "on-site" attendance. I am looking for something that I be involved in remotely. I am willing to travel internationally. So I am looking for active involvement and can also invest.

$20,000 to $100,000

United States > South Carolina

I am married with two children and I am a manager of a family- owned retail business. We are in the food industry and are considering expansion but we are looking for other investment opportunities to fall back on if needed. Since we are heavily involved in our day-to-day business operations at our current facility we are not looking to be heavily involved in another business but would be glad to be an advisor if needed or more hands-on in the future if things change current business. We have been successful but I'm looking for ways to diversify and start to build a return on investment business that grows and grows.

$1,000 to $30,000

United States > Georgia

Serial entrepreneur. Group investor. Former broker, registered principal. Owned a successful international venture consulting business.

$1,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Nevada

Looking for a business that I can be integrally involved in yet allow me not to have to micromanage. I am looking for a nice return on my capital and am looking to expand whatever I do internationally. I travel alot and I am only interested in working with individuals who have a Business plan in place. (Fail to plan, plan to fail philosophy here). I have Business experience in High net worth individuals, Entertainment, Real Estate and the stock market. I have also owned a Car dealership and managed portfolios and models. Please contact me with serious inquiries, be very realistic and if you haven't seen the show "SHARK TANK" Hulu it and watch the first 3 episodes so you can understand how I look at VC and Angel Networking investment philosophy. Thank you, Greg

$20,000 to $200,000

United States > New York

Built successful real estate development and media company.

$150,000 to $15,000,000