New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I am a married man that works in a family business owned by my wife's side of the family. My growth here is limited and I am looking to invest in something that may be a good opportunity for me to make additional money or possible even become a partner in.

$0 to $200,000

United States > New Jersey

We offer a variety of creative lending programs based on your situation. Bankruptcy and foreclosure is ok. We like to qualify your business for one or a combination of several funding programs. To do this we need you to send us an executive summary / business plan / or funding proposal. We also need a copy of a credit report issued in the last 30 days. If applicable include any information on the real estate involved including pictures. Funding ranges from 100 k to 50 mm.

$100,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New York

Age 27, single, NYC Columbia University, master in statistics Just got started to invest Outsourcing, bring resource and opportunity from China Hands-off Individual investor

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > Colorado

I invest personally in some ventures and I may refer (at no cost o the entrepreneur) them to company in California with greater resources. My background is in accounting (so your projections should demonstrate your solid understanding of the economics of your business and how it will succeed), the financial industry (banking and mortgage) and consulting. I have started a company from the ground up (been through the PPM process a few times) and been a part of a team that has grown a company rapidly and sustained that growth over years. I've been on both sides of mergers and acquisitions. I've experienced what it takes to succeed and managed through some difficult situations. I'm looking for companies with a strong core team, proven track record or can provide proof of concept (orders, contracts, LOI's, prototypes, etc) and have a innovative product/solution/approach that has tremendous upside potential. You need to be beyond the "idea" stage.

$500,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Nevada

32 Female Las Vegas Individual Investor Looking to make a investment in a solid and organized company. Currently own two business and have a B.S. in psychology.

$10,000 to $20,000

United States > Florida

My name is carl nicks. I am a 29 year old professional athlete. I have done well for myself and want a more hands on role on managing and diversifying my portfolio. Let me make it clear and easy for u to understand. In no way am I an expert investor. I have no high power connections nor do I know a lot about investing. What I do have is money and a strong will to succeed. Not to mention I've seen every episode of shark tank. If you feel like you have a good product and or business and the only reason you haven't succeeded is because you don't have the capital then I could possibly be the man for you. If it makes sense and you have a business plan that makes sense we can possibly make each other a nice profit. I also would consider myself a silent partner not stepping on any toes. I look forward to doing business with u in the future.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New Jersey

I am i young investor who has an enormous potential to grow young companies. I am an individual investor working at an internship at an accounting firm this summer. I believe i would add tremendous value to your buissness. I am open to being either hands-off or hands-on whatever your choice but i can be most effective hands- on. i have invested successfully before and would like to extend my success with your idea/company.

$0 to $2,000

United States > New York

Experienced business executive sold successful industrial products business and is now looking for new opportunities. BS Industrial Engineering, MBA Finance (Columbia). 10 years merchant banking experience and 15 years in my business. Capital, energy and expertise available. Prefer established business.

$50,000 to $1,000,000