New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > South Carolina

I am married with two children and I am a manager of a family- owned retail business. We are in the food industry and are considering expansion but we are looking for other investment opportunities to fall back on if needed. Since we are heavily involved in our day-to-day business operations at our current facility we are not looking to be heavily involved in another business but would be glad to be an advisor if needed or more hands-on in the future if things change current business. We have been successful but I'm looking for ways to diversify and start to build a return on investment business that grows and grows.

$1,000 to $30,000

United States > New York

$50k Looking To Put Some Private Cash Into An Existing Business, (rental property with existing lease, building, warehouse, lots, services business) This would be a silent partnership (splits) can be determined based on specs, as I Have No Interest In Being Involved In Day-To-Day Operations. Who needs a cash infusion? serious inquiries only please.

$50,000 to $300,000

Singapore > Singapore

I'm a young Digital Marketing Expert looking to invest money in consumer facing projects. I have a degree in Business Management and Marketing and 5 years + of experience in the working environment. I have worked for a start-up and am currently working in a start-up business unit within a large company. I work in branding and communications and have experience in all things digital i.e. search, display, ad-serving etc. I also have contacts in clothing and alcohol distribution and import/export. I'm absolutely willing to get hands on with a business if it is a good opportunity and want to work with ambitious people similar to myself.

$1,000 to $10,000

United States > Washington

Providing Joint Venture Funding for qualified projects. Min. funding amount $5,000,000 to $500,000,000 Larger funding amounts possible upon review. No DEBT SERVICE Many years working in the commercial & investment banking industry. Private Investment Group.

$5,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Kentucky

national financial company is a nationwide investment company of 5 partners who buy, sell, lease & wholesale commercial investments. we have been in the residential & commercial investment business for 7 years and we represent a large partner-base of investors nationwide who are buyers and sellers. our background is mortgage/lending is an loan officer, buying, selling & fixing up/rehabbing old homes, buying distressed residential properties, foreclosures, pre-foreclosures and short sales. we are looking mostly for a network of commercial investor who buy mainly hotels, very large skyscraper buildings, gas stations and very large condo projects. we need investors who can buy as high as $10 billion+ and who are serious and ready to buy. our goal to network is strictly for commercial buyers.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000

United States > Georgia

I have invested over the last 10 years in property over $200 million in value in the Southeastern United States. I am an individual investor. I have been in the real estate industry for 15 years.

$25,000 to $20,000,000

United States > Florida

I have over 15 years of executive-level experience in managing and investing in real estate.

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Florida

If you got nice concepts and good business ideas, you will be signed......Any Business that can get me 20% interest in 1 year....

$50,000 to $200,000