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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I'm an individual investor with an academic background in engineering (PhD) and currently managing a team at a top investment bank. I can bring in a combination of technological background and finance/investment banking experience. I am interested in a wide variety of opportunities and prefer to have an advisory role, but am open to more hands-on involvement if necessary.

$10,000 to $150,000

United States > California

Involved with Research & Development in polymers for about 25 years. PhD in polymers from USC, Ex MBA from UCLA. V.P. of Research & Development for last 10 years in a large corporation. Extensive background in intellectual property rights, acquisition and protection. Have been involved with several entrepreneurial developments over last decade.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > Texas

I am a young entrepreneur turned investor. I worked in retail management for 15 years and excel in people, process and profits. I intend to be involved in any investment I make and will bring years of management consulting along with me. I am married, have a great 10 year old son that I'm extremely proud of. I have invested in 4 business in the last 2 years and am looking for a couple more to help take to the next level. I would like to have a hands on approach for anyone that I help. I appreciate the opportunity to discuss with you further.

$0 to $75,000

United States > New Jersey

I want to help peoples dreams come true and make profit at same time

$0 to $100,000

United States > New York

Thanks for reading this, and good luck in your search process. I currently work in private equity (lower middle market so I could be exposed to hundreds of smaller, everyday companies) and was a former McKinsey consultant. Prior to that, I studied economics at UChicago and was my own entrepreneur (although a business model reselling coffee beans was not a huge success admittedly!) I have extensive investing and operational experiences from analysis, strategic structuring, to just hands-down knocking on doors. Within my job I also handle legal, accounting, and debt-related contracts and topics. Passionate about partnering with strong entrepreneurs in many capacities: from advisory to full partner status, depending on what you need. Can additionally invest as part of a consortium if that is valuable for you. Looking forward to hearing more about your venture!

$100 to $50,000

United States > Florida

25 years on the street.

$10,000,000 to $9,999,999,999

United States > Connecticut

I am 25 years of age single from new haven Ct I am a bartender as profession and being an investor comes from my family I am currently a CDL class A on netts in Bridgeport Ct. accountant no investment experience but i have a lot of contacts. I am an individual investor

$0 to $100,000

United States > New York

Review and consult for international projects for private investment fund

$1,000,000 to $5,000,000