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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I'm a private investor looking for alternative investments. I've worked in the financial services industry for the last 20 years.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > New Jersey

Work for past 10 years with top Fortune 100 financial firms

$1,000,000 to $20,000,000

United States > California

I am a very experienced banker/financier that specializes in merging high growth private companies with public entities and invest or raise additional capital in that process. I invest $1 million or more in the initial process and continue to raise capital or invest as long as management performs according to their business plan. I do not have preference concerning the industry as I seek top quality management and do not get involved in the day to day operations. My role at all times is negotiating new financing and additional acquisitions.

$100,000 to $5,000,000

United States > Georgia

Career as an Individual investor, investment group member and licensed broker. 30 years in commercial real estate investments and sales. Involved in Equity and Debt structures, Joint Ventures, and Investment Groups. Can provide Strategies, Capital, and Resources. Experience with deals of many types and in many industries.

$50,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Texas

Invested with private small businesses in Eastern Europe and public stocks in US. Had an active management role with many of the companies I invested with. Interested in diversified portfolio and generating higher return than what public stocks can offer right now. I like business models that can show potential for steady monthly revenues. I prefer a profit sharing agreement.

$10,000 to $100,000

United States > Texas

I am willing to be an angel investor! I enjoy making new contacts and being apart of succeful projects. I have the capital to invest, if the venture appears to be lucrative and love being apart of exciting turn arounds! I am always looking to help new business get off the ground, and turn a profit in the process!

$10,000 to $1,000,000

United States > Nevada

Based in Las Vegas, global entrepreneur, product design and manufacturing (offshore) experience in the entertainment facility industry. We also have a real estate investment company. Our goal, with a feasible opportunity, is to get involved to ensure the venture flies. We are willing to assist in distribution and manufacturing. We are not looking to write a check and check in with you in six months, months, so if that is what you seek, please do not apply. We will also need to feel confident in your ability to produce results, backed by some form of entrepreneurial past successes, strength around integrity and transparency. We seek partnerships, and shared involvement where our contribution can strengthen the venture. We are open to unique or unusual opportunities.

$1 to $200,000

United States > Texas

General Manager with much experience. Made a few investments at young age that has now become strong assets. Looking to find a young and hungry entrepreneur as myself with self motivation and desire to succeed in making his dreams and investments come through.

$50 to $12,000