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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Washington

Yocam Holdings LLC is a privately held for-profit investment firm with headquarters in Bellevue, WA. Founded in September 2006 by five members of the Yocam family, the firm's partnership manages a diverse set of investments within the company's portfolio while actively pursuing various venture capital opportunities. The firm's investment portfolio consists of multiple components across multiple asset classes such as investments in emerging technology, pharmacogenomics, real estate, and entertainment.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > New York

Successful entrepreneur looking to invest in companies with huge potential

$10,000 to $200,000

United States > New Jersey

I want to retire soon from my sales job.I am by myself with kids.Have my masters degree in psychology. I have in the past and in some cases still am investing in purchasing and renting out properties. In the past with a company dealing with tax lien. I have also invested in import and export with a partner at fixed interest rate.

$25,000 to $45,000

United States > Idaho

retired average guy with a succefull outcome

$10,000 to $500,000

United States > New York

Located in Rochester, NY. Married, 2 children. 61 years old. Retired CEO public Company. I Have multiple relationships with Investment bankers, investors. MBA - 1984 - Rochester Institute of Technology Multiple investments in Technology companies Looking for hands on, advisory or directorship involvement, I would really like to take the right company public. I have personally purchased, sold and merged over 10 companies.

$10,000 to $150,000

United States > New York

Marketing professional looking for interesting opportunities. Prefer something in manufacturing.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > Florida

Healthcare professional looking to invest in business venture as a private investor.

$50,000 to $100,000

United States > Florida

I can arrange for financing or invest my own fund depending of the risk sppread of the portfolio at the moment of submission by the enterpreneur

$10,000,000 to $2,000,000,000