New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Missouri

I am a chartered accountant with an MBA from one of the top business schools in Europe. I have worked extensively in the mergers and acquisition space. Worked with start-ups, turnaround and restructuring situations both in emerging markets and developed markets. Have experience in the US, European and African markets. I have started and sold several businesses. I am currently involved in roll ups in the financial services, oil and gas as well as manufacturing space

$300,000 to $500,000,000

United States > New York

Primarily interested in fintech businesses. Private investor.

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > New York

I'm a 53 year old retired software company director with a BS in Electrical Engineering. I currently own a small software company and I'm looking to be a hands-on investor in other startups both tech and non-tech.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > Colorado

I have extensive business experience in start ups, capital formation, partnership and venture structure, business plans and securing debt and equity capital for numerous business types.

$50,000 to $250,000

United States > Oregon

I am 28 years of age and am looking to invest in new, developing and mature enterprises. I am new to investing in businesses so I would at first like a hands off approach, if you feel you need a partner as well as an investor then I would be happy to see how I could best fit your business plan. I look forward to working with you in the future and helping facilitate your goals.

$5,000 to $200,000

United States > Washington

Investment objectives are to Increase my own personal net worth. To invest in companies that need equity and become partners. No experiance. Looking to learn and expand.

$100 to $50,000

United States > Arizona

I work directly with private individuals who have been investing in private funds for over 20 years. We fund almost any type of project and/or business. Terms and investments are on a case by case basis, and may be syndicated amongst our investment partners.

$10,000,000 to $9,000,000,000

United States > New York

We are a financial, advisory, consultancy, research, and merchant banking services firm formed in 2006. Since 1976, principals of the firm have created niche financial products filling the needs of our clients. We act as a merchant bank advancing our capital along side of our client in order to facilitate a transaction and obtain additional investors. Often, we advance seed capital in the form of capital (cash), advice, support services from other investment banks, architects, and our network of investors (both debt and equity).

$5,000,000 to $10,000,000