New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

Fund invests from seed to IPO round in diverse industry segments and regions, previous investments, wall street investment banking background; quick turnaround decision and due diligence

$10,000,000 to $200,000,000

United States > New York

30 years in the financial Industry helping business owners expand their business. And funding for Real estate projects.

$50,000 to $1,000,000

United States > New York

I am a 26 year old single male living in New York. I work at a hedge fund and have been working in the investment management space for the past 4yrs. I have experience researching and investing in businesses across a wide range of industries and geographies. I studied finance at a leading university (top25) and have successfully completed the chartered financial analyst (CFA) program. I do not want to be involved in running of the business, but would like to be included on big decisions and get operational updates. I am individual investor looking to supplement my income and diversify my personal assets.

$0 to $100,000

United States > Colorado

I am the owner of a restaurant delivery business looking to invest in new and exciting opportunities. I am a private investor.

$500 to $30,000

United States > New York

I am a Physician. I live in Buffalo NY. I have done some small business lending and investing from my self directed IRA. Unfortunately, as has been the case for many investors, I have been taken advantage of by scammers in the past. it happens. The result is, and please do not take personally, regardless of how sound, innovative, outstanding and potentially profitable your business idea may be, and regardless of the amount requested, I am going to have to do extreme due diligence and create iron clad contracts. Thank you for your understanding

$5,000 to $50,000

United States > California

I am a Wharton Finance MBA with deep contacts with debt financing sources from Domestic & International banks and Insurance companies who can provide low rate financing against assets and development projects. Larger projects are easier to get done than smaller ones. Contact me with details about the project.

$1,000,000 to $100,000,000

United States > New York

I'm a private investor who recently moved to New York city from London. I'm a consultant working for a professional services firm and I'm looking for interesting and profitable business opportunities in which to invest my savings and perhaps provide guidance or input if required.

$500 to $5,000

United States > Tennessee

I have been managing an investment group since 1994 and my mentor, who is still part of the group, had been in this business for 25 years prior to me. We look for strength of management and then available market share as our primary decision making criteria. My group is made up of business people who are looking for a solid return. We provide this to them and form a separate LLC to invest into ventures; this is an advantage to you because we only use up one investor slot doing it this way. I only deal with accredited investors and my group is made up of approximately 20,000 investors based primarily in the US but some are from Asia, Europe and Canada. I believe in doing business face to face and will require an in person meeting with all the principals. I am an entrepreneur myself and currently own 4 businesses. I will consider almost anything unless you do not have anything invested in the deal.

$100,000 to $30,000,000