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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > New York

I built a small business from my bootstraps and recently sold the majority ownership share. I know what hard work it takes to build a business. I'm looking forward to hearing about many ideas!

$1,000 to $15,000

United States > Washington D.C.

Hello, I have my Executive summary in a PDF Form..Is there an E-mail address that I can send it to.. Thanks Much

$2,000,000 to $5,000,000

United States > New Jersey

I am a Private investor with plenty of contacts and a strong following when the right deal is found. I have been a trader for the last 15+ years so I am comfortable looking at a company and seeing if there is any value. Hope to be able to help soon.

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > Texas

We provide ABL, Debt & Equity for All Industry Sectors and Asset Types. Control & Non- Control Equity Investments. Loans & Equity Investments from $3,000,000 - $500,000,000+.

$3,000,000 to $500,000,000

United States > Washington

We are a small business lender, providing loans to growing companies; no hard assets required. Our revenue-based business loans are between $100k-$500k, paid off as a percentage of monthly revenue. We have been entrepreneurs and traditional investors ourselves, too. Today we're private investors, using non-bank capital, and focused on entrepreneur-friendly growth financing. If you're a broker or consultant who helps growing businesses, we'd like to get to know you, too. We founded our business to address a real and troublesome "gap" in the market for financing growing companies. Today's companies get to market faster and cheaper than ever before -- but banks and VC firms are using decades-old practices that were built for a different age.

$50,000 to $500,000

United States > Florida

I am a recent college graduate that has been managing my family's finances and assisting in investment ideas for the past 5 years. I'm seeking a talented individual or group of individuals who has great ideas and seeks financing.

$20,000 to $500,000

United States > Arizona

STONEBRIDGE CAPITAL GROUP (STONEBRIDGE) has access to substantial pools of capital; sophisticated, long-term investors; and highly tailored financing structures for upstream, midstream, and service sector E&P companies. STONEBRIDGE SPECIALIZES IN: • Mezzanine financing for developmental drilling for companies with undeveloped reserves and fundamentally-strong development plans • Acquisitions • JV Partnerships • IPO (our group specializes in Mid-market IPO's, public offerings and advisory assignments; in 2013, our group raised over $20 billion for nearly 100 clients) • Institutional Investors • Private Investors • Growth Acceleration • Companies with proven, experienced management in place • Companies that need a strategic financial partner • Companies with successful exploration programs, but that are too early for bank financing given the ramp-up in production needed to hold acreage/leases

$10,000,000 to $99,000,000

United States > Pennsylvania

I am a managing partner for 5th ave acquisitions &venture capitalists . I have access to strategic funding sources, private money, and institutional money. Some of that may look like private equity (in other words there is an actual fund ready to fund specific projects) What we do is after reviewing your business plan we will then be able to understand where and how to present your business venture. Whether you want to preserve equity or if you are ok to give up some equity. There are different options that we have available and we create an environment that will give you the best shot at getting funding for your project.

$10,000,000 to $50,000,000