New York Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Local Investors

United States > Illinois

I invest as well as work directly with several investment groups. Looking for attractive investment opportuniites.

$500,000 to $9,000,000,000

United States > New York

To Whom It May Concern: I worked for international media companies for 24 years - had positions as Chairman, President, COO and EVP. Started a few companies in between. At this stage of my life I want to put my experience and capital to good use. I am interested in investing as well as active participation in businesses. Having 'skin in the game' makes a lot of sense. I am affiliated with a group of experienced angel investors and turnaround specialists in Chicago. We have a team of people who can assist with various challenges.

$10,000 to $250,000

United States > Georgia

I have invested over the last 10 years in property over $200 million in value in the Southeastern United States. I am an individual investor. I have been in the real estate industry for 15 years.

$25,000 to $20,000,000

India > ludhiana

GRADUATE IN COMMERCE, AGED 45 YEARS, INDULGE IN MANUFACTURING INDUSTRY SINCE LAST 16 YEARS, HAVE ALSO ENJOYED THE IMPORT BUSINESS WITH CHINA, AND HAVE EARNED AND SAVED HANDSOME AMOUNT FOR THE FUTURE PROJECTS.

$100,000 to $500,000

United States > California

Married living in California with business in IT and Construction.

$1,000 to $60,000

United States > New York

I am live in NYC and married with a few kids. I work as a financial advisor and financial planner. We have a lot of investing in good companies through the stock market and through private investments. I have a very good understanding of cash flow and balance sheets. I am a private investor. We own real estate and we understand that very well. If I have value to add I would be an advisor and sometimes I prefer to be a silent investor.

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > Florida

Have successfully raised millions of dollars for real estate, technology and beverage endeavors. Current focus in SE USA and Manhattan.

$1,000 to $10,000,000

United States > New York

I've owned my own self-funded businesses since 1995. I understand the entrepreneur mentality and drive, and I'm interested in finding some great entrepreneurs to work with and fund, to help them grow... and to earn a solid return on my investments.

$1,000 to $250,000